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The novel has good Grammar and only minor mistakes. The idea for it is very unique and interesting. I was instanly hooked and cant wait for more to be released.
I've read some parts of the Novel and the synopsis seems like it takes aspects of many nonhuman novels and it's pretty safe to say with it having a demon king creation system he will eventually end up becoming powerful person now I'll just join the journey as rome was not built in a day a powerful person is also considered in that category you can find out for yourself if you like this novel bye seniors and juniors
It's a really nice story, nice character development. I hope that the gaming part gets a bit more structure, I would suggest the writer to refer The King's Avatar on writing the gaming side of the story. But I am ready to accept all these little short comings hoping that the writing will get better as the story progresses.To sum it up it's a great work and I recommend everyone to read atleast 30 chapters before dropping this book.
It's interesting, sure, but the characters are flat. The author seems to think that humor or camadre comes from random snippets of party members shouting insults at each other or random nonsensical banter. Consistency was an issue early - either the author or translator did not properly proofread, since repetition of information seems to be contradictory: the AOE sweep skill that was supposed to have gone from 100-200% damage because the MC did a certain quest perfectly is displayed as 200% both times in the story, despite the first instance being supposedly 100. Several other, smaller inconsistencies in dialogue also pop up.The number scaling is also ridiculous - supposedly the number of players in the very beginning were 4 million simultaneously with over a billion after 5 years.... And the 'guy whose uncle works at the company' states that the VR helmets for the game sold 500 million of its stock preorder... Supposing that a super advanced VR helmet that connects to neural pathways was priced CHEAPER than today's high resolution monitor helmets at 500 dollars, and that millions of individual people could afford such a luxury and were willing to pay for it, the company would have just made 250 billion dollars of revenue. In preorders.However, if you can retain your suspension of disbelief then it's entertaining. At least until you get past the first 2 dungeons. The damage scaling doesn't change at all. The MC at level 16 can do 400 damage with his 'super op' aoe ability. Then later after more than tripling his weapons attack and getting a flat 50% armor penetration ability it does 700 damage to regular mobs. Then, despite the MC's perfect knowledge of the boss attack patterns and having party members that are described as being extremely good, being potentially pro level after improving some mechanical skills, they get wiped several times. From dumb mistakes.Overall, not bad.Honestly? Not worth being nearly as highly rated or popular.It has many, many flaws that can be easy to overlook, so might make for a decent read.
GAME NOVEL!!!!!!!!! Gaming novel can have all the stars in the world but what a pity can only vote 5 stars. I love Kings avatar a lot and hope this piece would become a good one.
The mc is a dog has no pride is dumbass is like a servant 0 iq why bcoz Mc was asked by one ***** to show him his sword man ship well how he had to go her to place and he dumb ass hell went their got humiliated like hell then showed her then got one of his guy killed in trying to flee he is so useless I can't even imagine
i like his way of writing stuff man , it simple fast and the world building is explained point to point in only one or at most two paragraphs , the punchlines and counters at the beginning were good but it slows down a bit , i like the mc cause he skips a lot of boring stuff ( the same as skipping a cutscene in a game you've played multiple times ), as I feel like it's about to become dull , it gets intresting really fast but the romance is kinda slow so if you are looking for a villain who bangs everything , this is not it , it slow in that regard as mc keeps moving back and forth and doesn't abuse his standing , so overall the mc is a chill dude who got reincarnated and does things at a normal human pace
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The only reason I am reviewing is because webnovel has yet to pick this book up over the generic garbage Monster Transmuter. I have only read 60 chapters but that much is enough to assure one that the author actually gave a lot of thought before writing and not simply throws the cliches at the readers.The mc is very likable and stands out from the generic cold blooded rebirth mc. The other characters have been yet to be fully fleshed out but they are intriguing until now. The plot is clever and has plenty of humour. Since the mc is very thorough in his actions, the plot armour doesn't have to save the day everytime. World background till now is honestly not something top notch especially for a non Chinese reader but well this has only started. Please contribute to this novel and push it to the voting zone. I don't want to take the dark path for this novel (yet).
One of best trial read. Already updated in mtl and still enjoying this novel. ....... .. ...........................................................m..mm........
I lik3 it so far I'm willing to keep reading if it comes out trial reads. told my bro about he says it sounds cool so he may read it as well.