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We've got here a story that involves our MC going from weak to strong. Like the author had said and is acknowledging in his comment, the grammar part is still a bit off, but it's nothing really noticeable. As on WN you need to update constantly, it's common for us, authors, to make a few mistakes, here and there. The premise of the story sounds interesting, and I do love that the author uses the prologue to present to us exactly what kind of world is the MC going to be into. Great job!
(Up to chapter 36 review)
The character development is done well, not too fast and not too slow. The author has done well to make the story interesting with a brutally overpowered MC and as of now I see great potential with the story. The world building hasn’t fully got the chance to develop yet but there is huge potential. Overall I would give this a read.
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What happened that no more updates were uploaded by the author, the novel is good, well, I hope to see one more chapter of it, I did not stop writing it, it is good
this seems good give raw
A meh novel which could be good but with a shzt author writing it made it trash ...
a retar*d mc ... braindead plot plan...
and shzt story placement...
it's certainly good than other things but still a trash...
I mean a better trash than others...
lol when i saw the summary i thought he was the only one that say the "boss monsters" and perceived the things as "dungeons" so i was thinking this was a novel about a mc that was mentality ill
I have to say.. Wow! I love the character development and the banter! The conversations are so natural and so interesting!! I need more chapters! I need them now!!
Really enjoy reading this book. Been reading awhile and voting stones. But realized I should probably leave a review.
My only complaint is that there ain’t more to read. Characters are awesome, and the story gets freaking CRAZY. MC may start out weak, but that changes a lot.
so far he is a slave of the system
