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I will rate you give stats for this one.The start alone was able to capture my attention.At least it has a better start than the God level mage.Moreover, the character uses the lightning element. One of my best elements.Great work.Can't wait to see how it will go!
Nooooooo! Jia Hyson, what happened to you?! Why are you suddenly become a zombie emperor?! Where's Bebe?! Bebe, how could you let your host become a zombie?! He's already that pervert as a human, and now he's a zombie emperor!By the way, author, who's the ML in this novel? Is it still the Bipolar System?And I'm sorry, I can't give an appropriate stars for this novel yet, it's still too early to give rating and judgement. So, for now, I'm going give three stars as neutral score.
Great story and plot, and very well written. I'm not really into mechas and sci-fi but this really recommendable to mecha and sci-fi lovers.
This story is Awesome. It could easily become a top 10 original novel on this site in my mind. The only issue keeping this story back from being one of the best? Grammar. The Author appears to be using Machine Translations to translate this story leaving it full of terrible Grammar. At least the spelling is on point. If the author had an English speaking Editor go through this it will rapidly rise in the rankings.
But as is? This story will turn newcomers off really REALLY fast. The grammar is just that horrendous. people even defend the author talking about how he/she has no obligation to better his grammar. Then he paywalls it?
The story is great, but I am hoping that it would be more clear after revising it. I can't wait for the ML to appear though. I though have concerns on how a chapter could sometime contains a short update
If you like your waifs getting drugged and raped aswell as some good Chinese Nationalism , this is the perfect novel for ya
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The grammar is so atrocious but I like it so far but the grammar is definitely something that would make me want to drop this completely but other than that I'm enjoying it so far
This novel is good,Concept Was good. But i Have one damn Question why the hell u Give this Good Novel to This Damn Translator to do the rubbish Work. When i reading this book i feeling like i am this book on MTL WEBSITE Or Some Raw Google Translator site. So i humbly Request to Webnovel , Plz Change the translator of this Novel..... I Requesting this as a Fellow Writer and Novel Lover........ So Plz...
a true hidden gem, it is a story with a lot of potential and although the grammar can be improved it is understandable and each chapter is improving. I hope you keep up the good work friend and don't drop it
I always judge books by their synopsis so when I read the synopsis of this book I knew I had to find out what would happen. When I read chapter one I was like I'm definitely reading this. I love the way the book depicts life in Nigeria
Hello author, This work is good and thanks for frequesnt update. i hope you will update regularly more chapters with more word count. I loved the system part. Please continue to work hard.
Novel is very good. Only thing that slightly (very slightly) annoys me is the name of cultivation/techniques grade name.Technique grades: The grades of a Technique: Preliminary, Refined, Lateral, Authentic, Mystical, Unrivaled, Primate, and Antecedent.If anyone finds the cultivation grade list, please comment.
