1. Writing is fast paced, the narration is stale and boring as well. the quality of the writing is a bit worse than many trial reads.2. Story development how should I say it? just decent.3. Won't say anything about updating stability. for now I will give five stars.4. World background is decent as well just not good enough for me, it is stale.
This novel has a lot of potential. I believe that as long as it stays in this level of interesting things, it will be a very good so I hope the author will keep on the good work!
A story well written!Young boys going on a adventure. A horror novel mixed with sci-fi and adventure. Author did a good work making up sentences. As a reader I got easily immersed while reading.
It's too early to say that the book is really good. Yet, it is good so far with its character development and slow yet impactful pacing. I'm giving it the benefit of a doubt. I hope that it really gets better.
Union is an amazing read all around! Absolutely love the Imagery used, and the complex moving issues faced early on! It has the ability to go far if given a chance.
Amazing storytelling, attention to details is impeccable as well, but i do hope the author could pace the character's dialogues a bit to make it sound more natural. the rest of the writing is good as always...keep up the great work, hoping to read quality scifi from you
The story initially doesn't balance it's ideas well in the beginning and it did hurt the pacing but it eventually found its groove and I pretty much enjoyed it. Hopefully the story remains consistent but I like what I see so far.
Books and media based on traditional and cultural games have always been thrilling to explore. Here this book is now just adding more exposure to prove this point and is seemingly thriller.Ahli's journey is going to be full of action and adventure!
A good read so far.......................................................................................
Writing quality is quite good. The stability of updates is good too and just to make sure, I checked the profile of author and it seems they have written quite a lot previous to this novel so if you're a new reader, just know this is the real deal. The story has good pacing. It's not perfect (this is obviously dependant on each reader so others might think it has the best pacing this world has ever seen and some might think otherwise, I'm just giving my opinion). Characters are described well and are given roles so they do not feel one dimensional. The only con I would say is the world background which I would right now rate a 2-3 star BUT the author said they are editing the novel so I will choose to believe in them. So if possible author, just add more details to the background to give a more vivid atmosphere. That was the only complaint that I had but everything else was good and I would definitely recommend to others.
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Really good novel, better than a lot of novels out there, especially if you're into demon gods xD. if i didn't know it i wouldn't believe this is an original, really good word building, the character development could be a little smoother (just my opinion ) but it's still really good a better than most novels. Good cultivation concept, i really can't wait to find out more about it.