"Ah, well. You're right, I'm not a miner," Max started, "I'm a Cog of the Clockwork Order, dedicated to the service of the Bronze Lady, the Eternal Construct, mother of invention and engineer of the machina mundi."
All the family heads were thinking about how strong this new weapon had to be in order to injure Leroux. But if the Lea family knew what it was and were not scared of it, it meant it didn't pose a real threat to them. If they could get a bit of it and use it as a weapon, they could contribute more to Kyus city and that would help them ascend positions in the city. Still, if the Lea family called themselves the strongest, they wouldn't argue with that. They would support it and even preach it.
I give this a super solid 4*, would give it 5 but the writing isn't there yet, but the whole concept is just great! This isn't your regular wuxia so don't have that expectation but the whole concept of the author can sharpen his writing enough i think will just be wonderful. Is this worth the pick up? Yes it's already a lot better than most premium out there which is your regular copy paste " i reincarnate, i get cheat, i get all girls, i get op etc copy copy". This is fresh new and exciting so yeah pick this up peeps.
Then they were popped by an ice shell from above. Their Captain was spewing fire-support from above, popping large groups of clones one by one.
Dude!!!I love this story!!!From your 4th wall breaks to the 1 liners, truly a work of art.Keep up the good work, and thank you for writing and sharing.
I have read up to chapter 560 and I can say the following:1) Don't start if you don't like blood and gore.2) The author works really hard to write the book, have you ever seen a writer studying biology for scenes of blood and gore?3) The character is intelligent and capable, just a bit stupid in discovering the system's capabilities.4) The only thing missing is little or no side character descriptions.Note: Sometimes we forget what the characters look like, so sometimes they could be reminded in the form of little reminders or a special section explaining character appearances could be published.5) In short, it is a book that has been given a good effort, you will not regret reading it.
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Interesting read but the chapters were too long in my opinion. Maybe because i am impatient that's why i wanted to know more. So except that, the world building was awesome and the plot is slowly uncovering it's self. So i would love to keep reading.
An interesting book. here goes my random thoughts :"To think There is only one age to be happy, just one time in each person's life when it is possible to dream, make plans, and have enough energy to fulfill them despite all the difficulties and obstacles. One age to be enchanted with life to live passionately and enjoy everything with all the intensity, without fear or guilt of feeling pleasure. The golden phase in which we can create and recreate life in our own image and likeness, clothe ourselves in all colors, taste all flavors and indulge in all loves without prejudice or shame. Time of enthusiasm and courage when all willingness to try something again and again as often as needed. This fleeting age in our lives is called the present and lasts for the instant that passes."
Thank you very much for an invite for a free reading of your creation. The story is interesting, has a great detailed description, and is a prolific writer that knows his plot well, interesting as you go on with the chapters.
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