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And yet again she dropped another amazing novel, patiently waiting for updated so amazing.
While I might not have officially started the first chapter of this book yet, I have been there in the previous versions of it, and I can tell you for a fact that this author has amazing writing quality and the story is great and flows smoothly, and as far as I can remember there aren’t major info dumps every other chapterSide note: author, if you ever want to delete this book again, can you please post a chapter saying why, cause I was so confused the last time you deleted it and had to stalk your account to find thisAlso
"It's….. General Ashe" Minerva said, for everyone not to freak out too much.
Usually I leave a review to explain why I’m dropping a story so it’s pretty refreshing to write one about why you should read one. The mc is interesting and relatable. He’s unsure about what’s going on and he figures stuff out organically or is sometimes left wondering but in a way that’s realistic. It bothers him but he knows to move on. There’s rarely any deus ex machina.The world is wide, vibrant, and mysterious. The mc, even after 1300+ chapters, has only touched a relatively small portion of it. He is exploring it with an actual purpose without falling into the trope of everything revolving around him. He still gets into stuff but it’s believable because he’s looking for the unusual.If there’s one problem with the story there’s a bit too much attention paid to, what seems like, one off side characters. One of the things I absolutely love is that the mc isn’t perfect. He struggles with a lot quite frankly. The unusual cultivation granted by the system makes him unable to utilize the mainstream techniques he comes across. He has to invest time and effort into figuring things out. The lack of knowledge relative to his power, since he grows so much faster than normal, isn’t glazed over with inherited memories or vague references. It really feels like discovering the world with him. Probably the most unique element I’ve found in this is the tendency of his power outstepping his techniques. All to often the mc in other stories are either kind of a one trick pony, they have some mysterious technique that they use from the beginning of their journey all the way, or they always have a new technique to learn as their stepping stone. Here the different stages are more than just being more of the same. What was a very powerful technique at one level becomes less and less useful but with a reason. I guess I’ve said that a lot but it bears repeating “with a reason”. Since there is an explanation for most things that aren’t meant to be a mystery I haven’t really found any contradictions in it and the story has held up for all this time.
A well-thought-out novel with potential. The way the authors plot the events is intriguing, making the narrative worth reading.If you are interested in elements like intelligent monsters, magic, and systems, I recommend giving it a chance. Well done, author!
Complex characters, an inventive use of magic, great worldbuildkng, gorgeous writing, and a very unconventional love story set against the backdrop of a tyrannical cult. Rowan and Wren are adorable!
top book for those who are interested in harem genre mc is great and not a naive idiot and the world is truly interesting . please keep updating author
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Finally, I'm here to drop a review that came directly from my... touchscreen device. The intro was a bit interesting- introduction of the character and his prowess before the official start of the work. The writing quality is great for someone who's native language isn't English, and the book's design is great. Although they are some minor errors, they do not affect the book's flow. The plot is great and starting chapters hooking. Good job man, hope you continue to release more amazing chapters!
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From the very beginning, the reader can feel that the author has a concept for the whole story! A big plus for that ;) The plot is intriguing, the main character has an interesting, quite violent, personality. ;)Well done!