So far I've thoroughly enjoyed his story. The Main Character is smart and know when to use things to his advantage well. There isn't a giant information dump that most other stories have that can bore the reader right away. The plot and writing are both very good. The world has a great background and it feels real and living. Awesome job Author. This story has me hooked.
This novel is not bad if you can ignore few thigs I could not.I would say it is absurd behaviour of other characters. I mean how they treat MC, it is just ridiculous.
You have such a good premise to work on. Your idea is brilliant but your story writing lacks alot of things. Also, please dont follow the pattern of chinese authors to stack in more words and make more chapters. A shorter story would be better if it is relevant. Also, the the modern world isn't as savage as the ancient one he came from. That is all well and good if it was in an ancient chinese world, but if you are writing about the modern world, make it so that the people act like modern people do. Now we do have a lot of assholes around but there are good people around too. Killing someone isn't that common and it isn't condoned either. Also, please don't mind my criticism. This is my first time telling an author my point of view and even that is because I am absolutely in love with idea you have put forth and I wish to read something extremely good rather than something mediocre.
Author of the works History's Number 1 Founder And History's Strongest Senior Brother so you know this will be good. Really recommend it, hope it gets picked
This novel belongs in the Game novel tag, not eastern fantasy. If you want to read an author who is creatively bankrupt and can’t come up with anything original this is the book for you.Suffers from the: lets take every ability, enemy, etc. from existing works so I don’t have to write anything myself barely.MINOR SPOILER:Also instantly we are met with cliches: unreasonabely powerful when in danger and showing more powerful thing he can choose but he chooses inferior one.Don’t get me started on also straight up copying skill descriptions and character apperances.
Great background, but it's all there is. Ok the guy reincarnate as a plant with a system, no easy to write about, but what happen to the story after that, who's the main character?The development of this story is too poor...
Tentative five star review for this Story.Amongst the game system transmigration stories, this features a Palatable lighthearted feel. I hardly review stories because most of the time they feel cookie cutter, and while this is, at least the writing has texture to compensate for the lack in depth of flavor. So, I’m looking forward to further reading.
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Has anyone have an idea if the Author has plans tp resume the novel? or has he decided to discontinue the novel.Author can you please clarify
I have read a lot of this kind of novels, but they all dissatisfied me. I dont know why this one didnt do it, but I expect a lot of it, until now it has been really good.
The cover, the title it's just good ? I think it's a great story.
When I first figures that a game and cultivation world is involved, I thought it would be yet another game system in a cultivation world. As it turned out, it's actually a transmigrated character in a cultivation world who can move into a game, which is created specifically to affect reality. I don't think I have ever encountered this specific combination before. The chapters so far have been a nice treat. Let's hope it will continue to be so.