Your genders are frequently confused, disturbing the flow and wrecking my enjoyment. Otherwise, very interesting...I don't have any other relevant observations to share!
Very detailed. Good characters. In excited to see where this book is going to go. I can already tell that the author has plans for the plot.
This is honestly the first thing I’ve read in a while that has kept me super interested since Rick Riordan put out his Percy Jackson series and The Lost Hero series. Really good work can’t wait for more. It’s like watching a new TV show that you are super into and you don’t want to wait for a new episode to come out. You just want it to be out already.
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A very interesting story with a nice fresh change up for an apocalypse tale. The current world building is going on nicely with a promise for more as the tale unwinds.The updates appears to be stable.I really enjoy the personality of the main character. And nothing about him seems forced currently. You just have the proper amount of background knowledge to understand the reason he is the way he is. And can simply immerse yourself in the story without having to ask too much of how and why.Very few grammar and spelling mistakes.And the story is moving at a nice pace. Not too fast and not to slow. Though the mc is slightly op with the potential for more of an significant for more power it isn't completely world breaking like most make the mistake of doing. As well as the fact that no stupid nerfs seem to be in route.Overall like I said interesting story that is worth the read if you enjoy apocalypse settings with magic included as they all should be...?
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This is boring... Couldnt read past 60 chapters, boring borig sorry sorry sorry soyr sory. One is beter, reeeeeeeee
The novel is okay but the MC is quite disappointing. i was going into the novel thinking that it was going to be about a alchemy store but it is not. The mc barely sell anything out of his store and just has the guild do it at exterme discounts that make no sense.The author says the MC get better after chapter 50 but the story turns into a op mc going dungeon raiding for the next 50 chapter and has nothing to do with the store.
The story has a lot of potential and I hope the author don't drop it , the story is good the characters is ok.... But after all this is the auther first story so I don't know how the story going to go, it could or couldn't get better.But I'm here to show the author my support ??
Please, if someone is selling guns, sell them to this author so he can put himself out of his misery, i mean why ****q do you even write with this standard of english? How old are you, dont you have anything better to do than torture people with you lack of imagination, your overflowing **** hormons are screaming lust in every single chapter, go jerk of or something seriously. I seriously wanted to give this book a chance because i try my best to be partial and rational and can even ignore poor english if story is good, but this doesnt even deserve 1/5, its just a plain 0000, go learn english and perhaps finish grade school before you start writting again?
The first few chapters are quite interesting but the rest feels like fillers. Personal opinion but would have preferred if the mc had a bit of solo time. Just feels to childish for my liking, a happy go family/friends adventure online of sorts.