I’m not much of a system reader but this one is really good. I enjoy the plot and I’ll continue reading more when published. Could use some editing but overall good job man!
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I love it, The begining of the story is so intriguing, I really love the intro. it caught my attention.its a very good book and the plot is really nice.Good job author, I hope to read much more
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Author shows an improvement as he progresses through the chapters. Something on my mind would be in the latest chapter, the partnership that forms between N and A. It reminds me a little of two thieves plotting a grand heist before it all happens. The image of partnership comes across clearly but there seems to be something off about it. All the best, yeah!
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First, i've only read the free chapters, so maybe it is building up in these.Everybody in this novel is absurdly tall, now you may say, it's okay that the 3 mentioned characters are above 6ft 5 tall, but I think it describes good what is missing here. There is a bunch off good ideas and concepts, but they are sadly put into a imaginary world, where the MC is the only person who can think a bit out of the box. Well not even that, everybody else would have to be plain stupid to miss this many points in the story.a bit similar to moonlight sculpturer, which is also not a novel, where logic plays a big role.This review is part of my new agenda: every novel off my list gets an review ( good Or now so)While my resume sounds really evil, I have to admit I really wanted this story to develop, just like you see your kid taking it's first steps, and you hope they take another, and not to crawl again.
good story. I love the anime and movie world use type. so i hope this get chosen..............................................................
In the future if this novel doesn't develop in the direction of mad max fury road with gamers doing crazy **** while raiding other dungeons I would be very disappointed.
overall the story is good. the funny plot not so forced and not lame at all. the interesting part is about the cultivation itself. but the story need more details about the world and surrounding environtment so the imagination of the reader can be perfect when reading it. overal it's good novel and worth to spend your coins on it. i hope i can read next chapter....
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Editer doesn't have novel taste EDITER CHOICE Cultural envans... Is 100 times better than this same young matter breathtaking face and bull****