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This is a near perfect novel. Main problems is that not too much chapters too satisfy my appetite. Premise of the book really fits the comedy. If you have read or like novels similar to "senior brother is too steady" or similar cautious cultivating novels, this novel will really make you laugh. Instead of only focusing on the mc, the author give each characters its own personality and unique characteristics that make the story more humourous and flesh out. Even with this, the story doesn't feel bloated and dragging. There is still a lot of side plots in it that is weave perfectly with the main plot without losing the humour. This is a really solid and funny novel. Really worth your time and I recommend this for reading.
another fake op mc how fun. Well someone else may enjoy this but I certainly don't like fake tags so yeah not for me
Website : qidian chinaViews : 8.55millionRating : 8.6(20)Chapters : 2423Status : ongoingWord count : 5.23millionauthor level : greatNo of works : 1Comments : 493Year started : 2016My original recommendations : Dadaelus : one of the best novel I ever read online and offline with superb grammar and awesome author bcoz he rejected the webnovel contract and gonna keep it free.Jay Aslan : one of my favorite novels on this site. Even though it's got very few chapters its really promise and Author's got great in music.Do check these novels out.
The story is one of the best newer stories on the site. However, the recent transition from less frequent regular sized chapters to more frequent tiny chapters is infuriating. The new chapters feel like nothing has been accomplished. Go back to the other way as this is ridiculous.
Love this story, fantastic writing and food description! Really goes in depth into the history of food and how it is intricately connected to the Chinese culture
Just would like to say that the ntr is still in process and it still counts as ntr author.But other than that its shaping up to be a pretty unique story also hate ntr and I want to kill everyone right now.
So, I'll divide this review in pros and cons.Pros:-Author has an interesting concept going for him, especially in terms of MCs power and his hidden identity. it would simultaneously make a great slice of life and action novel -The familiar school setting makes it easier to relate to-It's worth it to pass time, especially when it's hard to predict the happeningsCons-The author's perspective is inconsistent, some lines are written in the past while some in the present, some active and some passive, though nothing that good editing can't fix.-The choice of words could also have been better but again that'll automatically get better with time.What's important here is keep experimenting, keep doing new things with it, try to create something completely original. As for the problems with language, they'll get better with time. All the best!
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highly recommended
Nice storyline, however, you sometimes tend to switch from past to present tense and vice versa. I suggest to use past tense throughout the story because it is a lot easier. ?
Nice book,keep it up
