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"I see so, Maryline has obtained the right to inherit one of our ancestors powers?" Don inquired.
Sam looked a bit excited and so did her tail.
The systems are finally taking revenge. They’re always giving the mc everything and they never appreciate them. Always complaining like a little pu-huh-see. They will take over the universe. Long live lord system.
However, Rin paid no heed to his firm figure as her eyes were fixated on the arrow in the young man's shoulder.
So the soulless state happens only to protect the body and I guess the original soul is slowly awakening from its hibernation?Thanks for the update ?
"There is one who will said that, for example," Lie looked at Garet hatefully.
"So you finally came, .....with Akira?"
"Out of habit, I summoned the Status Screen to put my points into the attributes. Funny thing was, I was sure I clicked either Agility or Dexterity!" (Melissa)
So far this novel good points are:1- a Mc with a sassy personality2- a Mc with a sister complex even so the sister is not in the novel, she had mentioned the sister so much that I wonder if she got trap in the alternative world by her sister3- another novel with an AI system so those are funBad points of this novel1- the world the MC travelled is soooo boring, I feel sleep reading because of it, I hope in new chapters something really interesting will happens2- the Mc thought are really redundant so after saying all this I added it to my library ? I have the feeling I will be pleasantly surprise ... I will give it a try
please update more please update more please update more please update more please update more please update more please update more please update!!!!
Unnecessary descriptions You can have about 5 paragraphs talking about one character
here for the fast pass.....................
