This is another bangaaa... Well this another soft workWriting quality: 5/5: I don't have any reason for this 5/5 because it just what this work worth...Updating stability: 4/5: well still kinda stable... Story development: 5/5: this novel is so intriguing that u won't just wanna stop, from on suspense to the other...Character design: 5/5: well all characters in this work not bad... World background: 5/5: well if earth is not rated 5/5 no fictional word deserve it.... Overall summary: the book leans closer to China hidden cultivators appearing in the secular world, so just read....
I've read up to 405 and I am positively surprised. The story is well written, makes sense most of the time (within the built up world background). The characters feel alive and interesting. Up until now I have not found any "useless" characters. The readers also don't get all thought processes of the MC "upfront" so there are surprises from time to time (which I personally like).Fazit: Give it a try and keep with the story at least after the "lost dungeon arc" before judging.
Pretty incredible work here, especially for something so early in. I primarily have nothing but praise for this novel, I mean, I binge read it faster than I do most else. But really this story has had such an incredible progression, the writing quality feels top notch (for the site), and it just feels like this is the start of something great.My main positives:I love the pace here, MC progresses fast, maybe a tad too fast at times, but never too slowOnly 230 chapters in and the scope of this world already feels so vast, and if it’s properly explored, will be incredible (SERIOUS props to author on this).Cool enemy and game design and great setup for many future plot lines.Those are the just the huge positives but there is dozens more, now here’ just the most minor of qualms:Slightly concerned about introduction of unused characters, some of them are awesome,but many feel as though they’l serve a purpose and never be seen againMC hasn’t a ton, but I do suppose this can be excused considering there’s quite literally a trait on his soul dedicated to seeking his revenge :P.Anyway, short for time on this review but INCREDIBLE job, can’ wait to see where this goes!
This is not about cyberpunk 2077 Just so everybody knows. Mc Just gets thrown in a random world and needs to compete against players or something. And he needs to find something to change worlds? The whole story is confusing and Just throws you in the action. Its like a fanfic where we need to know the world beforehand. He gets a crew but they are some sort of Ai and self aware. Mc Just meet with 2 People from the crew and then gets sent to a race. Some chapters are too short.The grammar is good. World building is done poorlyWe have no characters designs. Story development is Fast. Maybe too Fast.Updating is Fast, but that is to be expected from a New story.
Trash series.....isn't worth the time..better read others than this pathetic novel...........................................................
This shameless author deleted my review(people commented on it, webnovel didn’t delete it), so I’m gonna make another.Writing Quality-6/10, not really that good but readable.Updating Stability-4/5Story Development- pretty generic but with a twist, 3.5 but I’ll round up cause you can’t do that on wnCharacter Development- Pretty bad, 4/10World Background- meh, 4/5The Verdict- trash for veterans, great for newbies
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i really recommended this novel. . for those who like comedy and shameless mc, i suggest u suppott this novel. . less cliche plot, hillarious plot story, amazing and cool cheat system, more and more beauty mc bullied and mc is hell damn op( but it is not revealed to every one, just his baby shi know it) i mean he is op bcoZ his strength lvel up way too much faster just by completing mission. . i dont think he is low key, but there are no opportunity for mc showing off his power. . please support this novel so we can read further chapter. .
Such a great book. I always fear reading Chinese novels because of the amount of over done cliches, arrogant young masters, borderline rape, and all those harem nonsense, but this novel has made me a believer again. I know believe that there's still hope for Chinese novelsBRAVO??????????????
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So excited to read more of this hope there will be more exciting episodes to look forward happy reading everyone ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?❤️
Very good novel Sam character is amazingThe best story I have ever readWhile I am reading story I couldn't remember any other workAll the best author