this is a masterpiece, same as your other novels, I'm glad that you got the idea of writing this and please don't quit writing the novel
So far I’m loving this story - finally an mc that isn’t a beta or a simp- he’s possessive in a good way and is not afraid to kill those who stand in his way - he’s still young thus he still has some growing up to do but he’s making progress - I hope he and his mom start developing their relationship more which seems to be happening. Only criticism I have - which is minor- is that when meeting the new ladies there isn’t any description on how they look like - for a while I didn’t know how anyone looked like, but this seems to be changing in the later chapter - oh and there seems to be too few chapters making it hard to wait for the new chapters to come. Author keep up the good work - can’t wait to see what new powers he gets and to learn more about his passed lives
Well, where to begin... It certainly won't be a novel for everyone. Both the title and the beginning may discourage many people, but I think it's worth giving the author a chance because the last chapters are really great and give hope that the novel will be really good. Personally, I like how the author presents the relationships between the characters. The relationship between MC and Violetta (definitely the best female character of the series) deserves special praise. I hope that in future chapters we will have the opportunity to see her more often.From the comments of other people I can conclude that the author presents the fight scenes very well. Personally, I usually skip half of the description, so in this matter I can only rely on the opinion of others, and they are very positive.As far as the quality of writing goes, I have no major complaints. Reading other noveles on the site, this one is certainly well above average.To sum it all up, objectively the novel deserves4 - 4.5 stars (with a lot of potential). However, I give 5 because of Violetta.
Please bring it back!!!It does not deserve to be dropped. I have been waiting forever for you to update it.This story is amazing. Keep going with it.
I’m not a picky person and I like reading system, isekai, and cultivate novel but the one thing I don’t appreciate is romance and harem because it doesn’t happen in real life that a women suddenly fall in love with you. It a forced into it with the damsel in distress bs
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The pacing is good, your characters are great especially Alexander, I love their design and development, the background is good and so are your descriptions and plot. Love the twists, overall a good story. Keep up the good work
Now that the first volume is done, here's my review and what I think.Writing quality- There are still some chapters I have yet to edit, but other than them I can safely say that the writing quality is good. I use both Grammarly and ProWriting as ways to edit my work, so I would hope the time I spend editing my work with them is worth it.Stability of updates- I can admit that this is the area I need most work in. I enjoy writing but it's more of a hobby. So with things like projects from school, work, etc. I find myself unable to write that frequently. However, I always find time to write at least one to two chapters a week. However, now that I'm done with projects and work, I have more time to focus on writing.Character design- I feel like this category is good. But it's still too soon to tell. Johnathan is far from perfect and still acts pretty immaturely, but he tries to keep that to a minimum since he doesn't want to die. In fights, all he does really is basic things like punches and kicks. Since he doesn't have any training. Other than that, there's not much else to say. It's still too early in the story to go in depth about his character.World Background- Same as the last one. Too soon to say anything. All we know now is that humans are turned into zombies and can evolve. That and the world is trying to save as many people as they can with 'bases'. Since the first volume was mostly the introduction to the apocalypse the world-building wasn't too focused on. I focused more on the rescue arc, and the powers they get. However, the second volume will have a lot more world-building and will show the results of the apocalypse.Other things- Only 24- 30 hours passed since the apocalypse started. The three got right into it and became strong quickly. However, they only seem strong since no other characters were introduced that had powers. The only reason why they got a good handle on mana was because of anime, manga, novels, etc. With those in mind, they progressed pretty quickly. They definitely won't get strong as fast in the future since... Cant really spoil.Anyway, I hope you give the novel a chance and enjoy it. Thanks for reading!
I read 202 chapter and was interested in the story in the story until mc lost his all good points, after being possessed by some sin mc become arrogant, careless, does not give his all, in fight he explain his abilitys to the enemy like a trash cultivator mc, I wasted hours on this novel to find out that mc after 160+ chapter become trash, the most frustrating thing was how I didn't know who I read about, was the mc thinking this or was he mind bended, or was this the sins thought? It was super confusing,.I would recommend the first 150 chapter, after that good luck. It became more frustrating to read after each chapter how mc became more and more......... useless, ye useless compared his previous self.