I really enjoy stories that have so much development in world building, and pay such attention to details in relationships as well. Every so often there is a shifting perspective that adds a new layer to the over all story that is very satisfying. I am an avid follower of this story and recommend it to everyone!
So I kind of liked it at the beginning, like the first 5 chapters because I felt the mc was cautious and would develop well. Then, the power he gains is poorly developed, and by power, I don't mean the dragon powers. I mean the system, it had serious potential, but the way it is designed leads to werid and unable to be understood power, and the way he gains exp is simple but bad in the grand scheme of things only allowing slow growth. plus, nothing is explained at all. How much power do you gain when activating your dragon power? oh, I don't know, a lot, I think.. oh then, how much speed do you gain when you put points into agility? oh, I don't know, but now I'm faster than a human. OK, how fast is a normal human in this fantasy setting, then? oh, I don't know. listen, I know that humans, on average, are around the 20 to 25 mph mark, but this doesn't have to be true in his world. as an example, the elf guy prince is so fast that it's hard to see him move. Next is the world in the first 40 chapters isn't flushed out, all you get to know is that there is 2 worlds and on the human side they have a wall and a palace and on the elf side there is fantasy land with a elf palace and other races.next is the Mc doesn't have a reason to do anything. He says he has a family but can't see them. he saves the elves for no reason. he trusts 3 randos just because and fights for humanity with blind faith for no reason, never even questions humanity even when shown evidence. I get that he is human and has been fighting for 5 years, but the people behind the wall and the people defending are different and have a sorta mistrust between them. it could have shown that Mc isn't blinded and is just cautious if he had doubts about the inside of the wall. if for a moment he didn't trust the upper echelon of the military and stayed awake because of it. all of these points are from 1ch to 35ch. Now, the story has potential for growth, but I must drop this because I won't pay for a maybe. I wish that the author continues to write but adds more info and really describes the abilities and how they affect the Mc more.
Please stop this, please ... someone please help me, please help me ....
"Car! Where the f"ck are you Carl!" I heard a voice, that voice! I tought my suffer is already over? The monster? Why he still a life?
After a long 'chat' finally i was arrived at school.
Getting to the rooftops and running across them rather than on even ground with Artemis. She lands before two chimney stacks, but before she can make her way around them another of Artemis' arrows is released. This one sticking to the chimney on the left and releasing a purple gas. Causing the assassin to cough a few times before she loses a grip on her sais and falls unconscious with a groan.
After all these they all went to their respective homes and for two or three weeks they all did some simple missions and one day after the mission Kakashi called them.
" Are you one of the goddesses in Olympus? " he asked
From there the drug was mass produced and sold at a high price on the black market, which was surprisingly popular with many levels of adventurers.
"Oh, you woke up Ken-kun, you're a heavy sleeper, come on" Nami realized she woke up and picked me up so I could take a strip too.
"Hmm... but I am still sleepy
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running