>Be me >See title >Sees "Harem" *Aggressively clicks on "Add to library.".*
Ok writing, ok story so far, a little confusing at first but I think it could get better.
story's not bad but author is definitely pushing a ton of filler and repeating things to up chapter prices slimy behavior at its finest. also the character was supposed reincarnated after making to his 20s but acts extremely immature and lacks forsight ?
5 chapters in and all I hear is praises for the mc and how great he is without any context and the word salad is must unbearable
Ok I see you athorcolease update I can’t wait to see what’s next
I finally surpassed the 50k words, so I guess it's a good time for a shameless author review...or maybe not exactly, I don't know.Think of this web novel as a prototype, I intend (if possible) to make it better and more engaging before publishing it as a book (probably on Kindle or something like that) so some things are prone to change in the future after all this is also kinda like practice for me.Anyway, I hope you give this a try, is not some masterpiece and is still just at the start, but im quite proud of this web novel.
Good writing, but I'll never understand stories where the FL loves the ML for no reason whatsoever, especially when he treats her abhorrently.
i see wall of text, hard to read, hard to visualize, hard to imagine, hurts my eyes and imagination, I don't know why people recommend this.
good, waiting for the next chapter......
The novel is very good and needs more readers, the grammar is also very good, I recommend many people to read it ? ? ?.....................
I kind of understand Cass, but still, what she did was bad. I just hope that she won't regret it in the end. As for Theo, I have a very bad feeling about him. I hope I'm wrong though
Glimmy is an amazing writer and this story has me addicted. No joke, I am constantly refreshing the app to see if the next chapter dropped, the story and characters are that good.