too long of a build up, inconsistent grammar, MC has a weird mindset, odd s**ual assault bit added in, cliche after cliche. I don't know what I'm reading sometimes.
Opening is quite outstanding. Characters are pretty decent too just lacking some fillers and emotions... Hope you'll work on it too best of luck from big brother.
This book is great, while the genderbender protagonist at the beginning threw me off a little bit, the plot and action afterwards throughly captured my attention. Great fight scenes mixed with character growth (literally and emotionally). Also the authors naming sense for skills and monster is top notch. Love it.
Good story line but please update some more because I'm really bored in quarantine and I like this book so I might forget about it if it doesnt update anymore
Well I'll sum this novel in some words.If you don't like a Super low key Mc then this is not for you.My view: I do like MC but you should know that all his problems will go if he just reveal his status.✌️ peace
Not a professional breakdown of anything but here is what I think.So boring. Granted I didn’t read much, and maybe it gets better, but what I did read started to bore me quickly. The start of a story should be the good but with it getting stale towards the end, but this was just tedious to read. The idea is cool, and if it was done well it could of been good, but it wasn’t. The MC was pathetic, and there were at least two plot holes. Arthur was supposedly amazing, yet he wasn’t even that good. Supposedly 80% of households watch people play, yet the MC didn’t even know the basic rules of the game. Didn’t make sense to me, I’ve never played some games yet I know how to play them. Another thing, who would just allow a spirit to control your body. It would be horrifying, imagine it. Not being able to control what you do, just being a passenger in your own body. It’d scare he **** out of me. Last thing I’ll mention is that Arthur wanted to create an unbeatable sword art, yet didn’t immediately try and teach his sword art to the MC. That didn’t make sense to me. Having another person well versed in your sword art would allow you to see flaws in it. Just my opinion, and I’ve only read about 20 similarly themed novels.
I'm admiring the story and plot... The characters are comprehensive for the story. This story just makes me wanna wriggle and feel tingly within.If you don't mind, please read my web novel, too:- Let Me Choose You- Who Are You- Facing Into The SkyThanks???
Why the hell was this novel removed from the voting list, it has just been 20 days , and it had more supports than that piece of trash chinese racism filled i am gamer bullshit novel. While that book had been present there for far longer. And yet you remove this novel from the list, and choose that one. another example of how bullshit and discriminatory this app is. Fuck you webnovel, i am gonna pirate all novels from now on, screw you.
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Love the book so far, you have a great system in place, and you are developing the story well, can definatly see this being a series of novels and not a one and done. Keep up the great work, and we will continue to enjoy!!!!
-This was a really entertaining book, I’d highly recommend it. The characters were believable, the plot was interesting. Five stars!-synopsis is amazing, really amazing! "I know, I know, don't show off,don't bully" is hilarious_the story at the first beginning is a bit off putting like u said, but other than that it's actually pretty interstin