Love the way the writer goes about his stuff there is no long delay in the protogonist's action as from something is to be done it has to be done. Totally love the novel and would recommend it strongly to all readers. There's only one draw back as there is no mass release .......................................................... but qaulity novels take time to create
The Story is really amazing and due to the fact that the MC is not Reincarnated and we see him go through trial and error btw he is not really binded by human morals because he was raised by a spirit beast so you may see him being cruel and so on probably but that's how he was raised but he does have a bit of humanity left and it's amazing how the mother (spirit beast ) cares for him as though he wasn't adopted and tries her best to give him a great future and he has no problems killing someone
Awesome story and i'm really looking forward to how it developes. Just a few things that i think would make it a better experience if fixed. 1- there are too many question marks in places they shouldnt be. A character would be making a statement and then there would be a question mark at the end, which isnt a big issue but can be irritating at times. 2- there are too many fully capatilised words or sentences. I know that its for emphasising a point but its a little much. Also all the "everyone shouted "WHHAATTT" " gets old. It just doesnt make sense and makes me feel like im watching a cartoon. 2- generally the spelling isnt that bad but there are a few words that are mispelled regularly for example the word "read" is always spelled as "red". Its ok if its once or twice but this has been the same since the start of the novel untill the current chapter im up to (100s). For spelling and grammar there are many free programs like grammarly that can help you. Anyway sorry if it seemed like a rant but im just trying to help you out and make the novel a better experience. Great job on the story and best of luck
Well, I read this again to see if what I remember is what it is... And yeah, it still a trash level... Too much hole, forced plot, nonsense and random stuff... Like he got chased and suddenly a chest is there... Its.. Sigh..
can't wait for this to drop, I had a blast reading this. I hope it gets picked up and not another novel about magic or another romance novel.
İts good story to read if you are too bored and are looking for funny and things to laugh. Story develops good enough and because its not always first character pov we can see reaction of others and it becomes more funny. Story's ending came to be shortened in my opinion it was too rush and i couldnt understand everything.Character also develops good enough and we see some ordinary figure to god like one. İts good story i recommend you guys to read.
A really funny novel, one of the most hilarious ones in recent times in trial read. Defo give a try.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t wait tell you write the next chapters soon so please write them soon so I’ll be able to read it soon and please don’t stop writing this book
It is to early to make a decent review.But from the quality of writing the story looks very promising. Many possible plotlines were introduced. It leaves a lot of room up to imagination. After Volume 1 or after the initial arc has been explored I will make more through review.
I will give a review. The story is pretty good. it's good to burn time. not too good but not too bad ... 8/10 ....sosjsbsisbsjsizbjxixbxbxizbaiaba
Honestly this novel is basically similar to any Xianxia novel you will read.Now before you guys start flaming me saying it's video-game and all, with monster mc etc etc, listen first. 1. The MC is underdog, poor.2. Smart but stepped on always. 3. Topper but looses his seat to some guy who uses has more money. 4. Father is useless and mc need to earn money in his stead to pay exhorbant loan. 5. Basically chooses options with quickest path to power. 6. System that is basically cultivation with the name evolution given. 7. Mc killls all player except 2, why one is innocent you child, umm OK maybe and her sister who is very pritty, while he happy to kill all others. 8. Extremely selfish. 9. No long sighted vision. 10. Never uses his gift perfectly, ways that are obvious to all.How much more would you like to read. 11. Oh and he is the only one to get quest for endgame items at the very starting of the game.Now you guys can continue you flaming if you would like to.
Currently at chap 94.Mixed on this one... I usually like when there is a bit of outside world story development but i feel in this case it's way too much and quickly becomes boring. The game aspect is great but after almost 100 chapters we had very little of it.