Plus, Laskey had to find Kalifa, not mind himself with other details. On another note, Laskey had, fortunately, found Lucci and Kaku while looking for his daughter.
The translation quality ruins the entire novel because the names and ranks are constantly changing to the point I'm not sure what is what
first of all, the writer doesn't know how to do math or something cause every single number is incorrect, either the writer is lazy or didn't even finish grade 3 since it's fricking easy math.second of all, the writer didn't even mention the character descriptions except the fact she has these big sacs on her chest and curvy body and her hair, not even describing how the face looks.also a lot of grammatical mistakes which could be ignored but still and I Think the writer just doesn't want to complete the words, like for example the word t-shirt got spelled "tee" like dude, what?third of all there is no word background description, or at least not enough, the writer is even so bored he doesn't even want to describe the entrance to the castle, like where are the rooms, what is in there exactly, he just mentions there is a room with a bed and closet at least from chapter 15 and before.
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This is an interesting story. It's dark and does not fit to everyone's taste. I will not spoil the story but here is my take:The scenes are well described and the story is engaging to read. I can really sense and feel the character's reaction and emotions reading the story. It's really a dark start and I can tell the reader had invested in the story itself.I am giving this story an overall perfect 5.0 for its potential. I can see the writer did a good job. Keep writing, you have done well!
Hi Mate, writing a review again. Good reading during my lunch hour. Thanks so much for writing and Gooday. Love you all. Thats my review. Bye.
I think I can see where thr story is going and I love it. It is a new take on the genre and it is what I have been lookong for. The only critique (if you can even call it that ?) is that the tragedy aspecg seems a little forced but other than that I love it ?
Great story. I also read the manga. I hope they make a anime. I hope he beats that old man in green into a pulp. I wonder the old man in green if it is his family.
I like Marrs already, and I like the cat power you gave the mc i also like the term Otherworld investigator
Very good so far, i do feel that Vivian could be doing more with her future knowledge but I am only 15 chapters in so far so we shall see as the story progresses
Wow, just wow!! This is an amazing read. It is really different from the ones I have read before. You have done a great job author! Highly recommended book!
This is a good story, the plotline is easy to follow, the author did a great job and the writing quality is good too, I look forward to more chapters and i wish you good luck!.