I'll keep this short, it's pretty similar to Plastic Memories whenever it's the plot or the idea but it's somewhat different but anyways it is a good story keep it up!?
Perfect! I have to say. The world-building, the characters, the fluidity, all of them are there. I would like to recommend it to all readers who enjoy Korean type dungeon story. I want to give you, the author a suggestion. I think you need to give the protagonist a more believable motive to hide his power, like a promise with someone important to him, an enemy he made in the past, the truth he can not share with anyone else, or his abnormalities that he fears to be realized by the others if it is known. It will give your novel a solid direction. good luck.
I have to say a great novel I like it I hope you don't drop it like others did ................................................................................................
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Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
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A very *Unique Novel* ?without much unnecessary events all I read is a mere 30+ chapters that have been published until know but I feel like I read 300 chapters of other classic-full-of-cliche-novels that has no true substance.It's full of suspense and thrill and have been coated with very beautiful mystery that make you want to go and capture Mr.author(maybe you should ask politely?)to reveals all the secrets that was playing inside the novel(Man it's full of plot twist?) this novel has many popular and well liked Tags but I will leave it to Mr.author to write it if he want.?I really want to know way are you wasting your time reading my review instead of reading the novel?Just go and read it.I really hope Mr.author will not give up this novel.Thanks for the entertainment.
You know I love animes especially action one and this book meets all of my expectation. The way the writer explains the fight scenes is superb and my imaginations is wow when I read through it. I highly recommend this book,keep it up author ???????
Writing Quality is bad and stupied.Story Development is like children book.Character Design you never make description to a Character height wieght and looks and backgroud and .....World Background first you need to make a decription in you first chapter about this new world that no one know about.any way great effort.
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