I like the person's background and the character. I think this has a lot of potential! Good start, may the writing Gods bless you with motivation and creativity to continue! I'm still starting a lot of writing projects like this, get excited and then lose it after the first few chapters, so I hope you have a better time than I do!
I normally don’t read novels like this but my boyfriend told me to read this one and I’m glad I listened to him! Harly does an excellent job painting the world around you and I couldn’t put my phone down until I read everything!!Everyone needs to read this book!
contrary to most, i actually like this novel. the characters so far seem likeable, or at the very least not just walking plot devices. also while the chests content is kinda arbitrary when considering the grade, the chest grade themselves at least make sense in terms of location, so the scale of power doesnt just go crazy out of nowhere(yet)
Very interesting story the plot is amazing, the protagonist's personality is amazing very good perfect, the Harem loved it very interesting and the heroines are very clear and interesting,I highly recommend you will not regret it
it's a good book but I think the arthur should put more chapters as long as there are chapters I will keep reading this book so keep up the good work and write more chapers
The book is pretty decent. Not one of my favorites but still has a good story line and a good plot to it. The main character is a little Whitney.
Even better than Pocket Hunting Dimension!!! A thousand times better!!!The author has really outdone himself this time. He really did a wonderful job in balancing out the MC's character.This novel is unlike his previous novel where the Main character's actions felt as if they were forced and his pushy character that always acted submissive when talking to his sister or any other female character. The MC's character in this novel is clearly defined, he acts logically, emotionally, with a hint of humour and still retains his whole character. The world-building is also marvelously done. I have not noticed any plot holes as of yet, and I hope there won't be any in the future.As of now I truly hope that this novel gets picked, it truly deserves at least that!!!!
Excellent writing, and an interesting story to boot. The characters are unique, and the world is well defined up to this point. The pacing is also very good within it's genre. Definitely worth reading!
Yay! New book from the author of The First Order and Spare Me, Great Lord! Hope this gets picked. First Order was extremely awesome and I heard that this is the sequel of it. Not sure, might be wrong, but the novel should be good all the same.
Very interesting and the parents are huge A**holes he I wish he could have chosen another race it would have been more fun and check it out if u like fanatsy and gaming
the character design of this story is so POOR !! & the armor plot is so BIG that i can´t deal with it anymore and dropped the novel.......................... :/
I haven't actually read this, but given that this author has 2 other novels that he didn't bother to finish and didn't even warn his readers if he was just taking a break through the comment section or an additional chapter idk if it is safe to start reading this since he might just drop it out of nowhere without mentioning anything.Aside from that the synopsis looks interesting so I'll probably give it a try anyway. If the author keeps posting chapters without dropping this and the story is good I'll edit my review and score later.