The only thing similar between the two was their obvious elven heritage although nobody would have the idea that the two of them are siblings.
" your husband didn't contact you after 1 month he left ?? And what about your baby ? He didnt know ?? " ask seungwoo with a curious face ..
Broken but still useable furniture
The girl who had destroyed the Snarghlah'ahd returned, standing next to the beauty as well.
I AM THE WRITER IF THIS , I am unable to continue the story on here because my computer no longer works, im sorry for the inactivity but I will be rewriting and posting on wattpad.
"I didn't do anything to you though," Charles said with a smirk that Sienna can't help but wanting to hit his face. Sienna felt like her life will be cut short a few years if she kept talking to Charles.
Iori's improved quite a bit over the last 6 months!]
thank you for loving this novel so mch.. invisible dragon is now over
he was no match for hiim from the beginning… ;;-;;
So far this novel is pretty promising. I've read several world building novels like this and the hardest thing for most people is pacing themselves. More often than not they will try to speed things up to get to the "good parts
good hook and interesting enough plot to keep you wanting for more. biggest gripe i have with the novel is the characters. the way they speak is unnatural, written like an ai wrote their dialogue, even their internal monologue sounds stiff and unnatural. another thing is their intelligence, the side characters feel like their a level dumber than the mc and they dont really act their age, things just happen and they just accept it. no questions asked.
Hey guys, I hope you will like this novel. English isn't my first language. But I am trying to improve myself in English. Also, if you have suggestions, do tell me about it.