Boring,nothing special, average,it's not bad buts it not amazing either at most this would be something you would read if you had nothing else to read on this entire app. Wouldn't really recommend much.
This is awesome!The writing quality is great. It was flawless. There were so many lines that could be made as quotes. The way Lorn sees life is on point. I loved where the story began. The story was developed in a way that could attract readers immediately. Since it's a video game-related novel, we can expect a very good world development as the story progress. Also, Lorn is pretty much an attractive character. It was a good read for me. I have already added this to my library and will continue reading to know what will happen to Lorn in the future. Keep up the good work author!I wish you the best of luck!
Same as always, very good but I just wish it updated faster but I can wait the waiting makes me more interested into the story and ready for future chapters.
I am just giving this 1 star.1. this book almost have nothing releate to farming.2. fast and boring development, it would be best if it was slow and steady.3. stupid mc and more stupid enemies.
I really like the story and world building .The thing that is settim me off is the good side of the MC cause he's really annoying and it makes it difficult to read while is in charge. Can't the MC embrace the evil side and become one? Evil mc is a menace.keep up author ?
Why is everyone angry? I did vote for this but how was i suposed to know the novel is haren lolicon type? Theres not much information to explain anything, dont worry your doctor with abs novel will come next week. ?
Actually a waste of space it’s basically all been something you would’ve read before
Nice novel. Pure evil Mc. Even I felt bad for his life's purpose and cruelty even though I have read multiple novels of evil mc. His is off the chart, mostly due to the connection you will feel along with the mc to other characters.The novel gets boring during some section but it will hook you again if you continue reading.Really dont read it if you are light hearted.Also his life's purpose is explained in the last chapter.
I just want to say that the way you wrote your story is absolutely mesmerizing. I find myself getting dragged upon by the waves that are your writing. Please keep up the good work!
I hate when idiots spam stories with five star reviews for no reason at all. Story is dead. No updates have come out for w month. But idiots are too busy spamming for exp to actually point that out to new readers.So tread carefully. Novel currently ends right before a big event and nobody has any idea when the next update will happen.
The novella is good, but it contains something that irritates me endlessly in novellas: the author gives the main character incredible potential, but he doesn't use it fully. This is the most annoying thing one can see in a novella, and it's also the reason I lost interest and stopped reading.The main character often repeats that he needs to get stronger as soon as possible, and he has the opportunity to surpass all the cultivators on Earth in, well, a week or two at most. Here's how he can do it—two ways that the author, for one reason or another, doesn't use or ignores, explaining it with dumb reasons.The first way, of course, is to have s** with Xia Shenyi, but he foolishly doesn't do it because of some promise he made when he was naive. And now, even after realizing how much he needs power, he still uses this stupid and incredibly annoying excuse.The second way is something anyone can figure out after reading about his physique's abilities, and that is s** with virgins. With his money, looks, and strength, he could have s** with hundreds of girls in a week and raise his cultivation to the world's peak. And as for his seed allowing people to become cultivators? Who cares? Without techniques and help, these women wouldn't be able to become cultivators anyway. So, the only thing standing between him and power is his stupid restrictions, because of which, 100% someone close to him will suffer in the future.I'm not saying he should go out into the streets and find them one by one. He could have used a brothel, which could have made for an interesting storyline. He could have also used that sect of some flower people, whose master he saved in the ruins. There are plenty of opportunities, but they aren't being used.
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