This story feels generic, and the story so far is cliche. However, cliche isn't necessarily bad. So far, the plot reads like most fantasy isekai. Same tropes that can be found in stories like this. The main characters and world are nothing to write home about, but I'm sure with enough time they will develop. However, I appreciate the fact that its LitRPG element isn't too prevalent like many other stories and their "systems". Those can be jarring for the readers, reading numbers upon numbers between paragraphs. The pacing is decent thay it is not too slow nor too fast; just right for this kind of story. There are many minor grammar mistakes, such as lack of periods in some sentences and some non-noun words that are capitalized. I dislike the use of omatopoeias in between paragraphs, but it is my personal preference more than anything. Word choice and descriptions leads to be desired. I also applaud the story's constant and stable updates, which keeps the story alive. However, with enough time, I think this story will improve.
the system is very convenient, it always says everything the protagonist needs, he doesn’t need to think, the levels don’t make sense the protagonist in level 1 can beat a group of goblins with levels between 5 to 15, because several classes it’s obvious which he will choose. it was better to just be born with it. I scored 3 because it has a certain potential, I will continue reading
If you like Hollywood type novels you going to love this, lets just hope the author doesnt drop it like others.Moreeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Another book from my favourite author! Here is what to expect : 1) The book is just a rollercoaster of funny . Some chapters are more funny , some chapters are less funny , BUT ALL CHAPTERS are funny !! 2) Ducks! Lots of ducks! and even more ducks! 3) Absolutely legendary dialogues and face slapping. 4) Impeccable grammar and writing quality! The story flows smoother than butter. 5) Whatt?? u want more? Go read now lurker !
I'm waiting for update, I like historical novels, please do your updates soon as possible. I wish this will have a happy ending. Wish you good luck my friend. This is the first time I'm
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Ano ano ba ipapaprint saanunsyo ilan ba yung teacher and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there
Another great novel more update for this one i'll be updating myself with these. I'm not used to reading harem novel but with the system plus kingdom building then this one is for me and you.. Please support the author to continue writing these novel. Thanks Again.
Maybe I'm just too dumb and not used to English (despite being a native speaker), but there are typos, missing words, possibly sentences in the third (or fifth?) chapter. Again, maybe I am stupid, but the English could do with a lot of touch-up. Can't really say anything about the stability of updates. But again, for the last time, the poor English is one of the few bad things about the book.Another would be the chapters aren't actually split into different chapters? I'm not sure if this was done purposefully, but the chapters are split in the middle of the chapter.One more thing would be that quotation marks ("") are missing in some parts, while the closing ones are sometimes substituted for apostrophe's (').Still, not a bad read, just needs a lot of touch-up for me, personally. Otherwise, great story development, could use more detailing (a lot of stories need more of that, though), the poems and creativity are amazing, and it has a unique start, of what I've read.Seriously, if I had an ounce of the creativity the author had, I'd be even better than I am now. A little vain, but who isn't?
I'm such a fan of this series. The first part had me guessing the whole time, and I was still wrong. Just the right amount of noir detective mixed with sci fi and some cool supernatural aspects. I can't wait for the next adventure!
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