That's a great work, keep it coming and please don't drop this novel because you will be dissapointing some of us. Love the way the MC is really perverted in all ways.
That's a great work, keep it coming and please don't drop this novel because you will be dissapointing some of us. Love the way the MC is really perverted in all ways.
The Author Here. Currently writing this review to deliver news to you guys. I started this work 5 months ago and had dropped it on the second day itself. and then picked it up 3 months ago. My grammar and English were so childish and cringe back then and I believe I have improved a lot recently because of coming in contact with other fabulous writers. The work is undergoing editing. I have been editing my chapters from the beginning itself one by one. People who read the prologue or people who have already survived (?) through the beginning chaps might find a lot of changes in the starting chapters. Because I have edited it all out. Talking about the editing, I am currently only editing for spelling mistakes, but have already rectified the grammar mistakes of the first chapter. So please readers. Give this newbie a chance and read my hard work as much as you can and support me. I cannot do this without you guys. TRUST ME WHEN I SAY THAT I HAVE BEEN IMPROVING. AAAAAAAAAA(Goes Ultra Instinct)
Gimmicky piece of trash. It is already bad enough every urban story has a LoL segment where MC impresses a girl.... Now its the entire story. Absolute trash. Dont even bother reading.
the novel is actually great but the problems is the translation it sucks ...............................................................................
the novel is quite normal the only problem is that it stopped updating from cap 40 and I can't find the raw.Moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore
Erotic scenes you say...???Sounds interesting.........................*reads*.....All fun aside....the synopsis looks interesting, and I have great expectations for this novel.I just hope the will be frequent chapter updates
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The information given in the book was very good for young and awe-inspiring writers, and it would be one of the most helpful sources. I am an author myself, and I liked the overall impact. Arigato!
The story is fantastic. Ich would Like to read it all my day.It's so intressting. It is just the uploding.But that's just a little problem. Thanks for your work.Keep going.?????????????
I just finished reading the 40 available chapters in the trial read. ❤️ This book is amazing. It was a bit slow or confusing in some parts but I stood with it. Soon, the pace quickened exponentially and my blood was filled with excitement for this book!? It was worth the wait... I have faith that the story will continue to progress in ways that will awe the readers to come... Thank you author!!!
This book is Very Creative, I have read a lot of Video gamebooks but I find this one a little more interesting. Turing the Afterlife into a game is Unique in itself. The book is well written and has a few unexcepted surprises. What I am most excited about is upcoming enemies Keep Up the Good Work Wild-Bunni