I'm not going to go too in-detail for this novel, just because theres not a whole lot to write about.First, theres a lack of detail in pretty much everything, and that kills the novel considering it's a slice-of-life. This includes the food, the era, descriptions of characters, and the setting in general. I really don't know how any of these characters look. Second, theres nothing here to make you stay. The main character is a history buff who cooks good food and makes good wine. Thats all we know about him. The King visits him in his bar to ask various questions, and considers him a sage. He never says anything too shocking, but for some reason all the people around him treat him like a God. These are things that would've been resolved if the King paid more attention, but whatever.Overall, this novel is rather barebones and once the novelty wears off, it becomes rather boring.
It was very entertaining. What a shame that the book was dropped
this is an interesting stroy. i have enjoyed it so far.
Not bad..pace abit slow and no other exceptional cheats
im absolutely loving it so far and i really hope this wonderful gem doesn't get dropped especially when tge story is starting to really pick up and go places
was good but imojis were uhhh ,am gone !!Maybe next time when there are no imojis ,but it is good nonetheless ,highly recommend this hehehe
it's a good story idea and the cheat the mc has is cool but that's all I have. the mc is an idiot and acts like he is 10 he is supposed to be a super genius accepted to MIT at 15 but he is an idiot and has no maturity at all. the people around him coddle him and treat him like he is 10 also. I mean he totally fabricated base and a water/sewer system from nothing and then builds a vehicle from scratch and has killed people but they still talk to him like hes a toddler and he takes it. I really cant get into the aunt and the freak women because that whole thing is terrible.. the dialogue is terrible and needs and editor in the worst way. the best chapter of the story was the first one and then it went to crap.
Too slow for my taste(dropped)Writing quality and stability of updates are goodStory development is too slow, nothing much happens even after 50 chapters...not much intriguing plot till now, it's all about MC growing up and all background characters are two dimensional. Sometimes character of MC feels a little bland and doesn't have any unique thing that separates him from others(MC is boring, feels two dimensional). After waiting for something to happen which can make me hang on to this story, I am dropping it. Sorry author nothing personal but everything is too slow, I know many say world building is good but I don't see much here. I hope it gets betterIt's not for people who expect a decent or fast paced novels.
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I like this story. It is not only written well, it plays like a movie as you read cos the whole thing just flows.If you love sci-fi books, don't miss this one ?
Hey guys, it's Ann here (you can call me Ann-nim, like the other readers hihi). So, I'm just coming here to thank you for the 15K of views, for all the funny and crazy comments, for all the power stones, and all the reviews. And for heaven's sake, I laughed a lot reading your comments. Knowing that you guys liked... it really makes me very happy. I hope you all have a good time reading my story, and thank you very much for your attention.