so far what you have written is pretty solid for a fan fic. keep up the good writting and please dont try to inject the MC into the main story of the anime, alot of fan fics try that and it ruins the story. something like a while that is happening the mc is doing something major to the side is always good.
After a very long time, something worth reading has been translated and translated well. Sincerely appreciable effort by the author who has beautifully focused on characters and story instead of power-up. Hope this gets selected and the story continues to amaze me. Well done author. Well done translator.Keep it up.
Great chill novel, tired of overpowered and arrogant face slapping mc and novels, just a normal guy living off with some luck, maybe later on we'll be able to see some growing about his talent and skills.Give it a opportunity.if anyone got the raw link or name fking tell me plox
I normally don’t read gaming novels, but this immersed me inside the novel so quickly I didn’t even notice it. Keep up the good work and good luck!
As you travel your way through the eyes of two wanderers, Asahi and Aletha, what secrets are thou ready to be discovered from your wandering? What can you find about the origins of the world and the people who dwell in it? What happened to the other wanderer all those years ago? What is the Verity of this world, and most importantly, what is the reasoning for the wretched Creator's attack?These are questions that you must find out... for yourself.* * * * *This story is all pre-planned and it will have Eight volumes.Make sure to add the story to your library if you are interested! If it's slow-paced, please note that it will get better as the story goes on. To see the character illustrations, go to the archive and turn on paragraph comments! Thank you! ^-^
Just from reading the first chapters, I find the story interesting, especially the attitudes of every character. I look forward for the next chapters and the development of the story!
It's a the same with all other novels. Mc does not cut the roots of his troubles. Let it grow and harm him back. The grand elder is so indecisive. A stronger fist rules over anything. Imagine the trouble with his clan member can be solved if the grand elder banishes his son to another place than waiting for a ticking time bomb for his clan. He has an idea that his son is involved with the 3rd prince and he knows that It is a danger if one is involves with the royal family. The usual novels having powerful system and a lower iq Mc supporters to pave way for Mc . I can't believe that when he is keeping his relationship with his servant he can't even notice his surroundings and his relationship was found out. Please make it logical. Having 2 lives should at least give him a chance not to be naive
This is definitely one of the better novels on webnovel. It has long chapters, it uploads every day, and the story is enjoyable!?The writing quality is close to immaculate except a few spelling mistakes here and there. I also love how the author made up sayings like "right off the stars" instead of "right off the bat." It really flushes out the idea of this being in the future with sci-fi aspects in the novel. the characters feel thought out, especially the main character. There is both depth and mystery behind the main character, yet his reactions to things seem both realistic but eerily weird at the same time.So far, we know enough about the world for us to form a setting. We don't know too much, but we know just enough for us to not have to question certain actions.Overall 10/10
Another totally superb work from Sloth. Always there to impress. The background is vivid and the author's effort in creating that story was purely impressive. Can't help but continue to look forward for more chapters to see how the book unveiled itself.
The story is meh the plot is weird and the mc gets betrayed by someone that hired him and the evil person basically does the I’m gonna explain my evil plan to you and the mc goes full retard and thinks maybe he didn’t mean to attack me
Grammar are bad and the plot feels so wrong on many levels. No proper explanation on cultivation levels what so ever. So many loopholes as the story goes on. I tried to endure reading until i can't take it anymore. Gonna drop this now. ?
like the book so I gave it an honest review just couldn't read past chapter fifty as I'm not going to spend my money on this waste of an app