even the synopsis is already watering my mind to read the actual story.....and when read, the book
Haiii-Aaaaayyyy-Tus.
I'm taking a break until the beginning of next month.
See you soon
I just can't enough of your writing it's really good, this book it's interesting, it's about magic, I wonder if this about witches, I need to know what happens next, couldn't get enough.
I see potential in this just do some more chaps and quick updates u will see this in top 50 in 30 chapters.
Keep it up............................................
i haven't even read it but the absolute lack of grammar in the synopsis tells me how this story will be and i can see a disregard for grammar
Just because there are three stars now doesn't mean it isn't a good story. There aren't really enough chapters out to rate it any higher. From the few that are out I can tell that we are finally going to get an MC that is truly dark and slightly psychotic.
Expect torture and the MC twisting the minds of others. Psychopaths do things typically because it brings them pleasure or perhaps they are merely curious? Their lack of remorse, superficial charm and manipulativeness make them absolutely terrifying. I sincerely hope this MC lives up to it.
Rating will be updated as story progresses.
One of my favorite things of this world is how much age matters, it's so refreshing for a story to have a reason for characters to have a reason to go until the end of their current realm's longevity, and be rewarded for doing so, just a simple thing that as a veteran reader really surprised me and i hope to see in more novels, but i'll probably depend on this author to deliver more of this in the future.Overall the story has great wiring quality, relatively few mistakes that don't break immersion, the story is complete so that's a 5 on stability for me, the development is pretty unique as we see shang turn into a true monsters by the end of the novel, the character design is fine if a bit bland, mostly due to how we only have a handful of side characters at a time, and the world background is amazing, aetherium has very clear rules that are always followed.One minor gripe i have with the world is how much the world incentivizes people to stay at the peak of their realm, while it does make sense in this novel as it helps improve comprehension it removes most options people have to increase their realm, which gets stale pretty fast in this world where you need that mana to go to the next realm, it removes too much agency from the weaker realms when the only way forward is joining a organization.Now is my biggest gripe with this novel, which is the ending, i heavily advice you stop reading here if you haven't seen the ending yet, the story is still worth reading.Man, this ending sucks. I've been pondering over this for the last 2 days, and the more i think about it the angrier i get, so follow me as i describe why i think this is a major narative fail.1. Show don't tell, we had very high stakes until this point, but all that is suddenly ruined, why? because from the start of this fight we knew shang was just going to play with the emperors, and the lighting emperor also knew. Come on you could have ommited that for better story telling, would it cost so much to make shang an emperor first at least so us readers are at edge, or at least make him seem weaker, let him beat the weaklings emper who barely have 2-3x spirit sense and then show his true power on the archivist, by removing all the tension from the fight the fight wasn't satisfying.2. The ending of the side characters is unsatisfying, they get mudered by Alex, which should be the good shang, and then sudenly you realise: shang didn't really have an impact on this world anymore, godamit just make them slowly be forgotten in the small eterneity it takes for shang to explore a way to escape the chaos, and even so it sucks that shang fails the promise to the lighting emperor.3. Suddenly this story is connected to another. I didn't read LitOW, the people that read seemed to like the epilogue, but i hated it, sudenly the universe takes a diferent scale, a guy sudenly comes, frees Alex of his eternal curse, says he took care of millions of gods before and instead of the ending of a novel we have a season 1 finale lol.It could have done both, introduced the world into LitOW cosmos with that immortal without ruining the ending, give alex a hopeful future without ruining this novel, also take away the part where he talks about treating millions of other gods & immortals and say that there are more gods & immortals out there.4. This frase "The most common problem is setting power as your goal instead of as a means to an end." beautifully misses the point of shang, first of all the common way to say this frase is power without a goal, who ever sets power as a goal? It may be to be the strongest, for freedom, for protection, etc, losing their goal is one thing, but power for the goal of power is very unique of shang and he's clear of his goal, he will become the most powerful, live for a while to see if something more powerful can come and then probably commit die, this comment was so... meta it took away my immersion and threw it in the bin.These are my grievances with your story, author, i am sadened by the ending but still excited for what is to come, maybe i'll read LitOW but probably will wait for your next novel, take care.
thank you for always translating this masterpiece for us
The correct way cultivation books should be written. Hoping for new chapters.
Sigh... Let me do it since no one gave the proper review yet –1. Mc is a transmigrated one and always thinks or should I say plan properly before acting.2. Story is a harem one, alright? I love harem... (No beta here). 3. Guy has a system that rewards him with points after he berates or beats the protagonist in any way. Points can be used in the shop. 4. Let's say the world-building is average but it's manageable. 5. You have to imagine all the character's features by yourself since it's a Chinese one. 6. So? Mc r*p*s protagonists until they are not protected by the world's will and then killed them. You got what I mean? 7. Mc gets overpowered after he defeats the first prot.8. Mc is a scheming one and you may find it boring simply because everything goes according to his plan so... Yeah f..* me.9. Chapters are free so read them as quickly as possible since it's free? Yeah the free thing is always good for me, lolFor AUTHOR,Author bro, thank you for such a Novel ?
I hope you could find more support and help to translate more chapters to release everyday. This novel really pique my interest as i've been reading a couple of novels/light novels in diffrent platforms. The story is somewhat comic but catchy and can get you hooked up for hours of read given that it could be updated massively each day...thank you. Godbless
im reading this book and I feel like the reviews aren't accurate this book is very cliché mc seems to be a masochist also might be retarded I was really hoping for it to be good since love monster taming novels but this is bad tbh its not interesting feels like a cultivation novel without the excitement and a lot of retards including mc