Dantes_inferno
Wait a sec, did he not write those in english? Unless i miss something, wdym?
I feel like the mc has a hole in his brain, since this Qing Mei and Priest Corpse appear is clear they are mora dangerous than anything even the Yu dinasty is not as sinister as them, but he still no sure if he need to kill them ? what a retard, mind controling people who where never you enemy before is the most sinister thing possible
This novel reads ongoing. Apparently this website is so deficient that it doesn’t check up on its books. It’s been nine months with no updates. So what once a year you decide with novels are no longer ongoing. Should not be like I don’t know a month or a week not nine months? I started reading this novel on this website because it reads ongoing meaning more chapters are coming. Fake news.
Good read. Rush ending but still good just finished it today.
Funny, light, and cute romance.
Very heartwarming, the ending very satisfying. Action, romance, sadness, hatred, comedy, deep relationship, you got it all. Highly recomended novel.
The story is rushed and even at ch 22 you can see that his love interest of 3 years who he killed multiple people for at this point is left the second he thinks the beginning village is too small and leaves to pursue strength without addressing anything he had a relation to his blacksmith shop his adoptive dwarf father left to him is left without any remorse.Maybe he comes back again later but I wouldn’t know as I’m dropping this novel at ch22 don’t waste your time reading this as it is poorly written
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Yeah this novel is dead alright... I'll just wait for another translator to show up and do the rest of the job. So sad, thanks, thunder, for destroying the novel and it's rank.
I just finished volume 1 and there are no spoilers below :)
I’m honestly blown away. There were some mistypes along the way, but I don’t think I’ve been so captivated by a book in a while.
The writing style was refreshing to say the least, and usually when an author hides important plot information from me (the reader) I get a bit irritated at how obvious it is they are going to use it for some dumb reason and ruin the story. This was definitely not the case here.
I actually enjoyed being led by the nose during this read. It felt like the author had a well planned and thought out story before they started putting It onto a page, and I really appreciated that. It made me look forward to that little bit of information the author might drop every chapter, and I didn’t want to skim or skip chapters (like I might usually do during other reads
This book is terrible and amazing. It makes me want to read more, and I can't stop. The problem is that at chapter 89+, everything is locked, and I can't continually read. I can only unlock 2, maybe 3, every day. This is killing me. Is there a way for me to catch up and then use fast pass. My friends got hooked on this, too.
Sorry if my reviews are too long but, this a modern day cultivation story, which is pretty uncommon. Now, it's very slow paced but some of you may like it that way since it's slightly reasonable, knowing that there are questions that haven't been solved yet throughout the story. I had few problems reading this at all and it's pretty good, as Qidian chose well. Here's why:
Translation Quality: The quality of Qidian's translations are truly one of the best, the editors and translators included. This is always expected from me, and probably most of the readers on Qidian. I literally found no errors in grammar/punctuation and it was all easily read and understood.
Updating Stability: The update stability (like always) was always followed by and true from what I've seen. The translators and editors have a schedule and they obey it (5 chapters a week). The translation speed though, could be a little faster, maybe 7 days/week. I say that since the novel is already completed and still has about 2000 chapters to go. Other than that no problems with this.
Story Development: The story and plot develops at a VERY slow pace. But if you ignore that, you find almost no problems. If you do read past the beginning, (unlike some other people) you find that it slowly get's better. There is a clear objective and the plot is reasonable and there isn't any plot holes. As the information is also given to you at reasonable times, as it is, the plot is pretty good.
Character Design: The main character and some very important characters have personalities and each have goals and backstories. But the side characters aren't really realistic, and girls may fall in love too easily (to the extent of 10 days together = love forever). He easily discards girls even if that happens (for the sake of cultivation) and makes it look like they're side characters, although they aren't, and indeed do help with the development of story and the main character. Which is why this is okay.
World Background: The world develops slowly and information is given to you slowly (like I said before). No info dumps and the world development isn't only at the beginning, (like some stories) and it develops throughout the story instead of all the info at the beginning. This makes it comprehensive and allows you to take it all in, and know what's happening.
Taking all of that into account, I rate and recommend this story at 4.4 stars! I liked this story and hopefully you do too, just get through the beginning and it'll get better (in my opinion)! Go ahead and read now.
