Raw? please..............................................................................................................................!!!
was enjoying the novel until the forced romance between marya and the protagonist. too forced. nor natural really disappointed. and it seems she's going to be a mainstay as the mc gon be her protector or whatever bullshit.
This is the best vrmmorpg novel I've ever read and I honestly dont like mmorpgs but now I really want to try one of them! Only flaw is that there's kinda a lot of writing mistakes but it must be hard to write a novel and it's not really that noticeable. Idk if this book is going to get updated but I sure hope so it's great and I'd love to read more. And also the slow story doesn't feel too slow which a lot of authors make way way too slow so great job!
This is an amazing original from this amazing author. He will be going places he is my favorite author. So far all the books I've read from this author are fuchkin pheonomanal. I hope to see more, I will hunt you if you drop any of these masterpieces. I would give money to support you I'm sure other others would too. Maybe think about setting something up.
This is so all over the place that I'm confused if either the translation is LITERAL or the story really is supposed to be written like this...remember this is a translation not a original so I'd expect a decent writing especially since after chapter 40 it'll be locked....
In the first few chapters aren't that good. but after the chapter 10 the story progress,the chapter 17 is the best way to put it. author keep it up
Can't read this in hunger game. Nees to wait fkr night to come sighOh well????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
It's actually funny to see that complete trash has better ratings than this average story. Let's try to give real reviews? No. Let's cry about certain tag or petition shit. Ok. Let's start with review. This story is actually average story about transmigration. This time, MC can come back to his previous world in any moment.It's not masterpiece or something but if you don't have anything to read. Story is fine. There are some unique parts about this novel. It gives off feel typical Japanese light novel though. I am not really sure if its source of webcomics. I will check later. Translation quality(5/5 - I read fast so, I might automatically skip minor mistakes.) Stability of updates(5/5 - This part is pointless for trial read.)Story development(Solid 3/5 - It isn't brilliant or something.)Character design/development(2/5 - Some characters are 1 dimensional)World background(2/5 - Author put some thoughts into those cities. It's still more work than 90% of modern novels in trial read. Copy, Paste, Done.) At least try first 19 chapters or so, don't be retard and rate 1 without reading.
Hello Author this story is very good so please update new chapter as soon as possible
Saitama system 5.0 delux now with skills for only one bald head, I repeat only one bald head!!! ........................................
Love the book so far. Little world knolage but that is understandable due to his circumstances. Do not let writing be a chore if you don't want to write then don't. Your readers will understand and if not that is their loss.
You my friend have always made engaging works and honestly I expect the trend to continue. I’ve loved your two previous story’s, sorry fanfics, and are excited to see what you’ll do with an original.Raiting 5 stars ❤️