It's a great book to read I love the story The Character the new Twist on abilities but updating speed is horrendous I honestly feel like I could wait for a full year and probably only get 5 chapters such a shame
The Book is a god among us. I can't believe this is the first book i read the moment i opened WN account. I had to leave a review.
A very interesting story so far but I do think you need to slow down a little you are jumping around and it get confusing. I do love a good werewolf story so please slow down.
The world building is good as you can see it has mysteries which leave us to wonder. I like the mc personally I feel like I would relate to mc he feels very human not too arrogant and a bit of humor. The characters are described well. Great work and keep it up.
Ok, now this is quite good for a change of pace, what else should I say, just read it, it's definitely worth your time... ?????????????
Honestly the story started of well i liked his talent and saw a lot of potential in it ,but i'm getting pissed by this dumb Mc . 1st of all he's 25 years and plays around with his high school sister and submits to her as a beta even as a joke it wasn't that funny as this happened multiple times.2nd The sister is much smarter than our Mc , she devlops his whole island and manages almost everything . The Mc is only useful because of his talent .3rd Mc takes too many fkin breaks when the event starts he doesn't have proper information about it or doesn't even try to acquire it and needs to be spoonfed by others. Not to mention he fights monsters for a whole entire day or week with getting sleep . But he then quits and takes breaks .4th Bro owns the island but doesn't what's going on in it after he opened it for public it's his sister who manages it and my guy doesn't even bother to check unless his sister tells him about it, plus he doesn't have any close realtionship with any of the core members other than knowing he's a core member of his alliance . 5th Mc pulled the save humanity part out of nowhere which feels unreal and he's very naive + he's not a schemer .6th There are too many multiple Pov's other than Mc it's getting annoying especially after ch 150 .
This is a great combo of Action and Kingdom (well, shop) Building, with a lighter theme. Well, so far. The MC doesn't have any real antags yet, except his bickering with Yun and the System. Their back and forths are great. I feel this novel's main draw is not placed solely on Jin's back, he's got a good selection of Supporting Characters, some of which are clichés (unavoidable as there has been almost every type of character) that move the story. And you get to see their views and a small glimpse of what makes them want to visit his store. Even if it's for band name clothes. This, so far, is a novel with great supporting cast that manages not to overshadow our panda, a decent relationship between Jin and his system, and light comedy. And we are definitely not left wanting on those action scenes.Overall, a favorite novel, amongst translated and originals.
Oh! Love is not that easy we know, but tough and hard we feel it. The story was about love and money it will be interesting for you and me to read it and go inside the story to feel the way the author wrote out of his heart about his love for his friend who was later betrayed and dump because of the love of money but his love never goes in vain. After he broke down one of his close friends helped him out by hiring a author from him to complete and fulfilled his dreams and the dream of the author as well.
An enjoyable read since I love superheroes and I can't wait to read the other chapters. I personally would describe more and use less sound effects like the 'woosh' and all that. It had more of a comical effect and made me laugh when the mood and tone was serious. I know. I'm unique ???. It's just like a comic book without pictures. I'd love to read the comic if you make one. Then again really good.
You definitely feel as if you are the mc. It has a good foundation from the start. Needs a few minor tweaks, but this does not take away from the story or flow at all. Has a really good start and for me a unique outlook. Keep up the good work author!
I hope you won't finish the murder arc too quickly. Is this going to be a long series or a small one? Are you going to include other cases with the main villain being the murderer? It seems like an interesting story. Thanks for the efforts.
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