Complete and utter trash novel, it’s so bad I don’t know where to start. 1. You have no clue if they started to cultivate 60,000,000 or 6,000 years ago as it doesn’t clarify as to which it is. You get it swapped on you every couple chapters or so. 2. The power ups in this novel are so bad they jump 2 to 3 realms in 1 go then they don’t even fight opponents in the same realm, as they make higher realms come in droves. 3. The romance is just utter garbage and it pisses me off to much to go into greater detail. 4 THEY DUMP ANOTHER FUCKING WORLD ON YOU AT THE DROP OF A GOD DAMN HAT. NOT TO MENTION HOW IQ LOWERING THE MCS BRAIN IS. and you wann know the worst of it HIS STUPID ASS THINKS HES GOT A BRAIN. Fuck this hogwash. Other than updating stability this novel is complete garbage.
The novel is a good one allthough many sories have the same plot but this novel still feels like that is pretty readable hope they continue translating by a miracle But if you look closely you can easily find that this story is pretty interesting even Though it almost has the same plotline like "my wife is a beautiful ceo".
Translation and updating aside. It is a super super super slow and almost boring novel. ? Snail paced or maybe tree sap flow slowness, or cooling lava slowness or I got it! GLACIAL hmmm...with the global warming even the ice is melting faster. Oh gosh let something happen already. The slowness is killing my interest and not in a funny way.
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Grammar needs major reviewing including syntax, misplaced words and faulty proofreading (e.g. faulty words such as 'minister' instead of 'monster'). Please fix the grammar since as it is it is not worth going premium. Furthermore, descriptions lack depth and color. Needless repetition of simple words make the writing seem inept or deeply disrespectful to readers. Nonetheless, the story develops at an okay pace. There are no for the genre odd jumps in power and it is possible to feel how the protagonist starts understanding things better and develops his skills. Other relatively organic growth is seen as the MC gets to know more people and thus gets a better grip on both his immediate surroundings and the world. Interactions are often however bland surface level affairs, where little though seems to be given by the MC apart from if they gained something and if they like the other person. Rare is the moment when any reflections about motives are given. Speaking of motives, the MCs motives are a bland affair with little development. It seems like the author decided to do a Pokémon and just point them at a competition and then see what happens. That is fine for a start, but as the story progresses there is need of developing the why and the implications. That is not done. We see no added depth to the MC, nor do we see any growth.This is really too bad since the world the story takes place in seems like a marvel of magic and adventure, filled with interesting organisations with individual interests that still don't act like complete assholes. Additionally, the mix of magic and technology might make for interesting world-building and something to add depth to social structure (for example why are the organisations like they are), and it would be interesting to see a characters growth and exploration of this world.
Knowing that it's by the author of Super Gene- this will be good at the start but then begin to fall off randomly and I can tell this is harem by just the description.
I really loved the story and got hooked to this one.... until I read the last chapter... i was looking forward to his tournaments and how all the four kings came to be know as true kings as stated by author. was this tournament the point in story where they got their names recognized ??? other characters of secret geniuses and the whole story about the craziest man alive will he be of any help to ichiro or not .... i guess these are all unanswered questions i am left with. I hope to see the 2nd volume soon, and hopefully you find the motivation to write it. also greatly anticipated ichiro vs arkenthym.
update soon or is it over with?
Interesting story. Good job
still only one chapter a day. how frustrating. all and all great book just wished for more chapters per day.
unfortunately this is very annoying