It's a good op mc novel, author has put alot of thought into world building and characters. Criticisms I have are the pov shifts a bit more than I'd like, and the world building itself is sometimes a chore to read, at times dedicating entire chapters for it, when this happens I just skim the chapter. This also makes the stories pace a bit more on the slow side with the changes in pov and info dumps. It's still good imo, worth a try
exp is my sword and I am it's wielder. Push me to level 4 and I shall be your benefactor. so I pray that you hit the like button and give me my exp Exp amen
Woah......time travel , my all time favourite. I always love a good time travel story . I would love to see how things play out for him . Can't wait for more chapters to be out . You have my support
This novel either suffers from translation problems, or is just so far removed from anything else that I'm missing the point of the story. If I can't understand the basics of the setting or mc in the first four or five chapters I must be missing some context that the author thinks is implicit. I'll continue for a few and see if I change my mind, but so far this is nearly unreadable.
Trash.......................................
This novel begins slow, but has a steady pace with a well thought out (and planned) story. A lot of stories have the problem that the main character gets to strong to fast. This is not one one them and the potential of the story is enourmes.
In my opinion this is one of the most underrated stories on this site.
Just caught up reading the story and I think it’s great even though it has its own deficiencies it’s awesome so I suggest you read it with no hesitation at all
This book has just a few chapters, and it is already captivating. Nice use of language and awesome characters. I highly recommend it for everyone ☺️☺️
Hello! I would just like to say that I really really enjoy your book! I dont think I’ve had this much fun reading something in a while. The story itself can be gory but does have a sense of comedy to it that I can really appreciate. Definitely adding to my reading list!!!
Like it so far. Only 6 chapters, but promising. Quite typical gaming WN so if you like the other ones this might be something for you. The writing is not perfect, but it's mostly lack of commas and punctuation so it's not to disturbing. Which I way better than most other original novels here.
Author here I like to express my gratitude to all the readers that stumbled upon my work .I am great admirer of carthage civilaziation and espacially its famous general Hannibal Barca .So I hope for this to be a great reading exprince for you guys ..And of coure a shamless 5 star rating .
Umas das minhas ou se não a preferida atualmente. Um dos pontos positivos que posso dizer é a forma que é usada e como a história vem se desenvolvendo, a um ponto que não consigo dizer que vem à seguir.