Just like what another reviewer said, this story feels rushed and there is minimal characterization here. The MC is like an AI who just acts for sake of progressing the story. He does not have any defining trait aside from his cheat. He currently has no goal because he had already achieved it (becoming a warrior), and he doesn't seem to have any strong reasons for becoming strong as well, he just trains, maybe so that he would be able to save damsels in need. The world seem safe enough after all.
O cru "我能复制天赋".
Minha tela de pesquisa fica branca quando faço pesquisa em chinês.
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Hi, Im Berlianov_
Author of this novel. I'm sorry if my english grammar is bad, bcoz english is not my native language. I'm in here just want all ur support of this novel, and u can tell me advice too what do you want from next chapter to be new chapter or bonus chapter. Thank you!
Not bad there is room for development with some creativity you should be able to get up and running in no time
Great story! Similar to the ultimate scheming system but his alternate system causes a lot of extremely humorous scenarios. The protagonist is overbearing and shameless which leaves me grinning as I scroll through the story.
Good novel, I really liked the writing style. Atleast it's much better than the mtl or stale sign in novels being recently released. There is not too much nationalism just glimpses meshing well the story.
Hey! author here, so I have to be shameless and give myself a free 5 star review, right?
I hope you guys like this novel, it's my second time trying out such a genre so some things might be off, I can only know when you guys tell me so comments are important if you see any flaws.
Also, this is for the WPC so please, if you can spare a few power stones for me, that would be amazing.
I hope you all have a wonderful day!
I have really high hopes for this as a SCP fan! The premise seemed interesting and the SCP name drop makes me anxiously waiting to see how this goes. I really hope this gets picked up.
the chapter 447 make me go from completely love to completely hating this novel even if this fic is probably a 3.5. the motive is in the chapter in question(447)mc have his soul intertwined with a alicorn and they are tied to each other forever,it's extremely ridiculous how author make mc go for it without thinking in the consequences, mc is literally marry a horse(it's already who that the alicorn parents have this bond). I find it ridiculous to think that in the future his future lover will never have a relationship more intimate with him than a horse and the same go for the horse. I think author in trying to give mc a good pet only make unecessary drama in doing in this way
I'm highly confused by this synopsis. You're constantly describing it as one creature in one sentence then the next you say "they kill, are cruel, and hard to kill" but then go back to saying it's a single creature.
There should be a slapstick comedy tag added to this novel. The MC is dumb and I feel like my IQ has fallen after reading this. This is like Napoleon Dynamite, stupid humor. You'll either really like it or really hate it. I fall into the latter group. Napoleon Dynamite sucked.
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