Black_Reaper13
This is my first time to read a cultivation novel with a female MC in it; neither isekai'd nor a trap in a sense. It's quite refreshing because some of the cultivation novels I skimmed through, are, at most, males; quite hard to read due to its harem nature and usual fantasies of men.The essence of conflict and struggles are the same, without system and plot devise that always favored the protagonists. No fruitful encounter or some orphaned MC that hailed from somewhere noble and all.It's a light read that could help you understand the cultivation genre for those beginners. Some cultivation I say, are all throwing things here and there without sufficient explanation for basics. Since our MC is a commoner, the story entails in the slow pace of explaining things, as it is part of an ignorant suddenly have the chance to the way of the Path.There are some teasing, but not always like those cultivation novels that catered men, it is acceptable where girls often had admiration towards handsome and able men.I warned that it's a slow pace of cultivation in a true sense, without bounds and leaping through like a canon ball. So every chapter is quite an excruciating excursion.
Hey have you found another romance? Care to share? Every time I read the title of this story, so frustrating ah!
Chapter 555, dropped it.-500 chapters in and only 10days have passed and he and his clan is already stupidly strong. Also expect one day to span across 50chaps-it got annoying how he always gave equipment and pills to his clans in bulk too easily to the point that none of them seem to know how to get powerful without him-Most importantly, I didn't like how his 100xreward talent worked on actually worked on living beings like they were some sort of reward to him especially when he does it without their consent. I honestly felt it didn't seem right.
Heavy grooming
I’m the author so I’m obviously gonna give myself a good review
MMORPG: Rebirth of the Strongest Vampire God
I confess, the cheesy title made me strongly hesitate before reading this novel, and only its consistent presence at the top of Webnovel’s charts finally decided me to read this story. This is by the way the second volume of Raj_Shah_7152’s MMORPG trilogy (the first being “Rebirth of the Strongest Guildmaster” and the third currently underway “Villain with the Strongest System”), but not having read the previous volume did not prevent me from enjoying this tale. Because yes, I enjoyed it.
The setting, a wide universe mixing fantasy and science fiction while integrated with a MMORPG-like system called Sigma, is very well written, coherent, with many levels of underlying mysteries unveiled as the story progresses. It also evolves significantly with the actions of the characters in ways that are natural and logical.
The characters are the best point of the tale, from the protagonist Max Rajput, to his brother Rudra (the protagonist of the first novel and a true deuteragonist in this second part), to their companions, families, allies, antagonists and major sides characters, each is described with a complexity in relation to their significance. None of them is all white or black, everyone believably exists in shades of gray, with their merits and flaws, the antagonists can elicit sympathy and even the main characters’ shortcoming are not hidden, as well as their consequences. Another good point is the evolution of the character, especially the MC and his entourage, they change as the story moves forward, they accumulate power in various forms and experiences gives them new perspectives.
The power system is well made and coherent, resembling a RPG with levels, tiers of power (from 0 to 9) with stats, skills and mastery levels. But what differentiates the main character from the rest is how he progresses in this system, more than the quite small cheat he gets as a regressor/reincarnator at the beginning. His advantage is mostly built with his hard work and suffering.
The story is the final strong point of the novel, as Raj Shah gives us a true rolllercoaster of a story with action, intrigue, a bit of kingdom building (the shallowest part), romance (the harem part is well written) and comedy. It is not the best I’ve read, but it’s very good.
The writing is a bit of a letdown, as it contains quite a number of mistakes, typos and misspelling, at least one per chapter, sometimes more, even by the end of the novel. Honestly, the author should get a proofreader. The style itself is on the other hand quite good and dynamic.
So, despite the mouthful of a title, MMORPG: Rebirth of the Strongest Vampire God is a very good story with a fine setting, excellent characters, logical power system and a dynamic style of writing with sadly a serious need of a proofreader. My final verdict is a low 9 out of 10 (with a high 9 if the novel was to be corrected one day). Raj Shah certainly deserves praises as a great author and I will certainly read the last part of his trilogy once it is completed (although I’m not sure I will go read the first part, as part of it has already been spoilt for me), or I might for another of his tales in a different setting.
Kergonan out.
I think it's good. But I got bored easily
The character and storyline were going really great right up until the author tried to be edgy when he picked out the character's last name, as a Christian that felt more like a slap in the face than anything else.
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I read this about 1 year ago and I must day Im disappointed. Not because the novel is bad, no. In fact I would say its amazing for the novels on webnovel. What Im disappointed in are the insane grammar and spelling errors in the novel. If they were to be fixed, I would read this regularly. The novel also has some odd things with techniques. I still dont fully understand the cloning technique, even after reading 150ish chapters. Having an auxilary chapter to explain techniques like this would be useful, because I had to wonder what he could do and couldnt without any answers. Finally, cliches. The novel has MANY. But, they arent in your face telling you how cool it is to be supreme etc. Its mainly for plot and story, so the MC, the main focus of the story, doesnt suffer from the usual bs that comes with all the cliches.
It has potential to be amazing, but holds itself back due to its details.
