Thisbis perfect kind of laid back I wanted to read. I am more than happy to read this kind of novel. Though the chapters are bit short, the quality makes up for it.
80 chapters in and like a suspected at around chapter 20 it turned into crap. The author has obviously no idea of the concep of supply and demand as he can just repeated but these lower grade herbs at dirt cheap price with little rise in price.Like obviously when you suddenly buy large bulks of goods the price of those good will naturally rise. Not to mention in chapter 80 he manages to get 400,000 points worth of herbs.It was stated that 10 year old Ginseng is only worth 1pt so that would mean he got 4 MILLION Ginseng 10 year old ginseng. it’s not like they have large specialized ginseng farms that constantly produces them in large quantities and as far as i know they pick them in the wild. Not to mention the minimum growth period is 10 years....I can go on but you get the point
although this has a good start, i don't recommend it.. me, personally, dislike it when mc goes full servant/man-slave the second he sees girl... this may seem like i am overestimating the servantness of mc, but truly, i am not. i may be a narrow-minded no-life for thinking like this, but so be it, because i couldn't even make it to ch. 70 without convulsing and turning off my computer... but that is just my personal opinion. other than that, rest is ok i guess, but really can't deal with that bs where the mc goes way out of his way for no apparent reason because the other party is female... and so blatantly at that.. oh well, maybe its just me.. if you are into this kinda stuff, by all means, read it! but if you as much as a little bit dislike this, then leave now an clear your browsing history! out of sight, out of mind.
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Excellent start. Nice characterisarions. Thorougly enjoyed every line of the story. Looking forward for the next part. This story will definitely rock. Good luck.
Can the map be of the whole worldbuilding of all the land mentioned so far be shown here please? or someone comment if you have seen the link/source
One of the best sport novels but it needs more time for the story to get to its best part (3th year middle school and high school). Hope to continue the good work.
hope author gets well soon ??? and lots of love for the author ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️???????????????????❣️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?????
A fairly solid novel. While this novel almost completely consists of already existing common tropes, it's still somewhat interesting and fairly well thought out and executed (so far at least). The power system seems respectable, it's like a simplified version of Warlock of the Magus World's power system although there are some shaky bits right now.One example of this is the lack of elaboration as to why there's no magic in the Knight Kingdom when it's so ridiculously easy and convenient even if you have the worst talent.With a bit of time (less than half a year for someone with the worst talent, much, much less if you have decent or good talent) and no resources apart from the magic textbook itself, anyone could get a more superhuman version of a photographic memory easily. The MC literally memorises a page of a very complicated book a second. I'll give this novel the benefit of the doubt and expect it to explain the these seemingly glaring issues.Otherwise though, this is pretty good. Worldbuilding is alright, characters don't seem too bad (this is a CN novel after all) and the quality of writing itself is decent as well.This is no Warlock of the Magus World but it's decent enough so far. At the very least, the protagonist of this novel is far more likeable than the insufferable protagonist from WOTMW. 4/5
It's almost perfect cultivation novel. Really. You can't find anything better. MC is intelligent, strong but not OP. Pacing is good. The only bad thing is that every time i read it i feel like some drug addict, wanting more and more.
great story
Please update author. Can't wait for the next chapter..