Abyss0813
I love this writer. Another great story. Can't wait til it's completed.
Beautiful love story, one of the most unique plots I’ve read so far with. Very touching & emotional but still realistic. Also it’s rare plotpoint that Hero & heroine are each other’s firsts. Technically well-written - no grammatical errors! Wish there were more Hero’s POV, but loved it anyway.
Beautiful story
Great book and waiting for Theo’s POV…somehow I like the male POV always more…
After chapter 13, there's another story. They never go back to the first story to finish it. I wasted time on the book.
Hands-down, the best book I have read on this site and it’s not absurdly long with thousands of chapters, it’s a perfect blend of lust, love, betrayal, and action. it was almost impossible to put down. Standing ovation to the author it’s a masterpiece.
Another story that will surely worth reading...
very interesting story,, can't get enough of it.. eagerly waiting for the next update.
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like the story..thrilling
great book really enjoyed the story
I honestly wasn't sure, but if you're enjoying it I will continue
The pacing here is absolutely merciless and I love it. Chapter 1 starts almost normal—high school student on a bus, reciting classical Chinese, the mundane details of morning routine. Then the older sister appears and everything shifts. The author doesn't rush the reveal; we see her beauty first, then the belly, then the discomfort, then the pain, then the labor. Each beat builds on the last like waves crashing. The bus stops function as structural markers—each one brings new pressure, new characters, new cruelty. The yellow-haired streamer enters and the tone darkens significantly. By the time the water breaks, there's no going back. Chapter 2 escalates immediately—no breathing room, no relief. The driver gets out of his seat and physically handles her. The livestream numbers climb. Mianmian's resistance grows. The final image of the older sister arching her back, neck stretched taut, is a cliffhanger that will absolutely destroy you. The author controls the tempo like a horror director—slow dread building to unbearable tension, then releasing it into pure panic. There's no filler, no wasted moments. Every sentence pushes the story forward or deepens the emotional stakes.
