Grey5502
New in my journey but I also like your work so far. Keep at it and try Improving you go along through the process. I will continue reading and give my feedback as I read.
author just keep repeating coherent lines and some minor antagonists were just generic
I'm highly confused by this synopsis. You're constantly describing it as one creature in one sentence then the next you say "they kill, are cruel, and hard to kill" but then go back to saying it's a single creature.
SHAMELESS5-STARRING YOUR OWN NOVELMY GOD, HOW SHAMELESS CAN ONE BE TO DO THISDAMNis this still not 140 charactersuh... yes, bro damn bro
What an awesome work, brilliant and intriguing! It's a gem,and I really like your writing style,it's amazing,and I hope for more. Keep up the brilliant work!
good story so far. Author I'm curious I'd you need a beta reader/Editor? I'm good with English vocab and Grammer. I dont need any money. Please feel free to contact on discord, Fenris#6876
Surprisingly one of top 10 of novels I have read.
webnovel, it isn't fun anymore. i don't want to see a simp getting an op system or talent but instead i want to see some depth. No, advancing a level and killing a lower level person on repeat along with the crowd getting shocked isn't depth
The premise is a mc who is a killer n arsonist and goes into game and becomes a tailor and makes undergarments for women... Coincidentally meets only women and tries to befriend them all so he can hook up with someone....virgin stuff....i read that the first 30chapters are like that amd after that comes the real story...so i have to put myself read all that harem **** ? No thanks...either delete them or use them as a separate story lol...
Men don't become empress they become Emperor so the synopsis is stupid
As the opposite of all scheming, plotting, backstabbing, the theme is just...... SMASH MY ENEMIES. IF YOU HIT HARD, I WILL HIT HARDER. But yes, fun read
overall I love this story I just would love to get more chapters. if you were to update regularly I would be almost addicted to your story and I want to read as much as possible. please speed up your reading we know something big is coming later on please don't take a year to get started again. you definitely have one of the best stories on web novel so far and I have read about 100 already
