so far liking it came here to do the task keep it up author
at first I thought I found some hidden gem in the pile of trash in webnovel...the tow first chapters were promising..a serious mc with a great cheat kinda gave me the vibes of some epic cultivation novel...yet the moment the academy arc began everything went downhill...the mc got his first friend..yep the same fatty trope everywhere...and the we start an unending series of "whoha" and some childish shit..then the female friend with a tragic past...the author was trying to build a comedic atmosphere with a touch of some heartwarming moments and he failed miserably....the academy that was supposed to be some huge behemoth was gathering with its headmistress to watch a match between tow newbies that just started a week ago...there is no depth at all and everything seems shallow...the magic was absolutely trashy..I thought I was reading some martial art novel...the author messed and delivered a very poor power system.....I can rant nonstop about the bad things in this story..so I will say it's a story full or overused cliche...no depth...no a single thing intresting..it may suit some new readers but as someone whe read hundreds of books...this novel only belong to the trash category
Okay, I gotta admit... this book is really good. I'm serious!First chapter in, and I could already feel the vibes. However, things got even more interesting after that.Rooting for you, Zephyr. Lets do thisss!!!
great book, bad grammar, but i understand and im starting to get hooked so is it possible to know when the update will be?currently looking for a good novel genre like this one and life merchant, if anyone knows any please let me know haha
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The first chap got me hooked and I couldn't stop reading. It's really a nice book here. But it would be nice if written to the third person and not first person. Written like this, you can only talk about scenes where the MC was at and not other places. I recommend to change or it would be complicated in the future. The grammar and vocabulary is fluent and the characters developments are so nice. Continue with the work and you shall be rewarded
The female lead is cool that she can make anyone bent whether it be a girl or a boy. I also like that she's not just like those usual female leads that gets beaten and all. Overall this story is great.
Looking forward to it..........................................................................Ugh.. How many more dots to put .............. Finally !!!!!
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Outstanding indeed, this get rid of my boredom, upgrade upgrade upgrade, honestly if I were to have a system like that I would upgrade a brick to the limit and transcended it into a godly artifact and beat up those cliche young master with...
This is so good and I really enjoyed reading it. I hope you update soon. It's been so long.I love how she got someone who loves her and family to be there for her. She is really nice to people who doesnt hurt her and she did protect the weak. I guess she the person that everyone wants to be. Admirable and strong. ❤❤??