I really like how he copies Craig’s list to Price List
Really enjoying this book and the story is different. I just wish that the story gets updated regularly and I don’t have to keep waiting. Please update!!!
at this point i am not even shock anymore on pancakewitch creativity but i do hope that what is bugging doesn't come true.
At first I wasn't sure about this novel, I thought it was just another return from dead thing, but boy! did it turned out to be super interesting!! It got mixture of all gig we see in western fantasy novels vampires, demons, mage, angles, fae etc. If you are interested in any of this you should totally give it a try. Its just getting started so there isn't much to be said about world building and characters but overall story has potential. All the best Author-sama.
This is alrightThe mc is very unlikeable (at least imo). He is contradictory in his actions, creepy and dumbThe dialogue is kinda dry and only a few lines per chapterThe monologues are insanely long and full of overexplainingThe concept of kingdom bulding is nice but after 25 ch not that much of it and thats the main reason I wanted to try this novel. I can understand that it’s tied to his lvl but that just slows the pace a lot + with the monologues makes the novel to lack substance most of the chsFor short, nothing special. Maybe the choice of weapons and the intricacies of the kingdom building that will be present in the future chs but 25 chs are enough for me to wait for those before bouncingStill way above the usual flaming garbanzo reads though
WOW! I REALLY LOVE THIS NOVEL! HUZZAH! The synopsis was really funny, in a good way. It made me laugh and entertained for the first few chapters. I cannot wait to read more about ALEXANDER'S GREAT ADVENTURERS HUZZAH!!
This is an unique plotline, and the story is amazing. I don't see much problems with the grammar, and I suppose it needs a bit of proofreading. Other than that, it's a great work!
Please keep the novel uppp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so far i like it but i would like a bit of more character design so do that and yeah it's a good if you like novels with system so keep it up good work
It have an interesting start, really made me intrigued. I love the sound effects, like I can imagine the sounds in my mind. The chapters are decent long, will not make you bored. Keep up the good work author !??
Probably too early to write a review but I will write one for now to be reviewed later. The writing quality is of great quality, the characters are well defined for their roles, the military worldbuilding is nice so far and the updates is perfect. The chapters are long which I personally think is good. The storyline is developing well too but I will wait for more chapters to see better. But, so far, so good. Keep up the good work.
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