Another overrated fiction. It's suffering from a lot of issues, and inconsistencies are everywhere. Although it was an entertaining read before chapters 30 onwards.
He was a hundreds of thousands year old god before reincarnation, but for some reason, he acts dumb, even when he's not intentionally acting.
I'm fine with his people progressing quick because of him, but when they start overtaking him cause "reasons", and suddenly regressing cultivation because he went and punched his grimoire (which is something he shouldn't have done with his mental age), it's disappointing.
If those things are made for the sake of "comedic effect" then it failed badly, it's not funny at all, and the built premise in early chapters are just falling apart instead.
Grammatical errors are everywhere, sometimes the MC is referred to by "he", and suddenly becoming "you", or something similar. It also happens with the females, being referred to as "her" sometimes then "him" other times.
The events seem like they are written on the fly. Things happen out of nowhere without any hints, making the narrative suffer. One example is the appearance of his master, only being said that the MC felt his presence days before when the guy already appeared in front of him.
The characters are bland. The female characters follow common templates, but the execution is lacking, their characters aren't built from the ground up, you get the end results via timeskips.
The "bad guys" are mostly, if not all "arrogant young master" template, no depth in personality whatsoever, only either obnoxiously loud, or h*rny b*st*rds.
This story is actually pretty great and the grammar is fine unlike other douluo dalu fan fictions on this site. There seems to be a plan and it updates at a decent pace.
It's pretty good actually Its just the chapters take too long to be released ...........I have nothing else to say so LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA
This fantasy story is written nicely. I found myself thoroughly enjoying it. I was kinda bothered to the symbol you used for quoting instead of a quotation mark or maybe t'was my first time to encounter that. However, the plot is perfectly fit for the chapters. I'm adding it to my collection.
This story is alright but it’s quite interesting for me. I would really like to see this get chosen although not as good as Game of life or apocalypse forecast it’s still a solid story compared to some of the other trial read books. Man am depressed that those two didn’t get picked but hey what can you do am I right? Anyway I hope those of you with coins could invest some here so it can be picked, it’s really a interesting concept.
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i like the story line, the emotions are so raw and real and it's beautiful how it all comes together making the reader feel all that they get to feel - raw, honest emotions- I guess i can say this book takes me deep inside, and is definitely worth the while.
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I love this book. It's more like a fantasy novel with terrified creatures/monsters. But the cover looks so scary, and this tittle - looks like a horror novel - probably doesn't express your main content correctly. Perhaps change them you can get more views.