Author is a hypocrite
Surprise it's Yaoi
still no update?? its been too long...
The story is predominantly told from the MC's point of view. While the narrative can be a bit lazy at times and the world-building progresses slowly for the number of chapters, the plot remains interesting and fresh. The relationship development is particularly intriguing and well-executed.
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While the story captivated my interest and held its own, I couldn't help but draw comparisons to the last book I read, which, in my opinion, surpassed this one. The narrative was engaging, but the previous book had a certain magic that elevated it to a higher level. Despite giving this story a respectable 4-star rating, the characters' designs seemed reminiscent of the earlier read, lacking the innovative touch that would have set them apart. It's not that the characters weren't well-crafted; they just felt a bit too familiar. In the end, the tale was enjoyable, but the shadow of the exceptional previous book loomed large, making it difficult to award a perfect rating. Nevertheless, it remains a commendable effort with room for improvement.
Einlion begins a new story once more. Past evidence shows that the probability of this story getting anywhere is unfortunately, abysmally small.Now about this story. I’m honestly baffled. Einlions stories for the past few years have just been a bombardment of “18+ scenes”, while skipping any sort of meaningful relationship build up leading to said scenes with the love interests. This is probably the main reason most of his readers were tired of him writing harems. Why would you want to read something that practically lacks a story because it’s bogged down by lemons with characters that had zero build up leading to them.What does this have to do with me being baffled? It’s because this story is apparently an attempt at writing something without a harem. Yet what does Einlion spend a large part of the story doing? He’s writing meaningful development between the mc and various female characters, giving these characters: interesting personalities, backgrounds, aspirations, oh and of course they all want to get with the MC. What does this mean? It means Einlion is finally writing what was missing in his latest stories, except since it’s not a harem there will never be any satisfying pay off. Am I saying the characters aren’t allowed to have depth if they won’t be love interests? Absolutely not, that would be amazing if only Einlion didn’t spend so much time describing how nearly every female character has a crush on the MC and how lucky they would be to get with him.Would this have to have been a harem for there to be a satisfying pay off? Nope, but it’s disheartening to see the MC have amazing chemistry with characters like Ohta, that could lead to really fun to read storylines that take place throughout the story over time and literal reincarnations instead of what we’ve gotten before in previous stories. “Nice to meet you! wanna bang? Sure!”Once again, I’m baffled. In Eins harem stories, he’d skip straight to the spicy scenes with no build up (Honestly I’m sick of lemons at this point). Now in his “non harem story”, he’s taking the time to build actual characters and their interactions with the MC, only to never do anything meaningful with them. Plot wise sure, he’s to die soon and will go to another world so it makes sense for the MC to not want to start anything. So why even have a large part of the story dedicated to how much everyone wants to get with the MC. Should have just not mentioned any romance at all from the beginning and instead keep everything platonic. Idk anymore, read it if you don’t mind reading a “no harem story” that has all the build up with multiple characters but know there will be nothing to come out of it in the end.
Completely worth reading..its kinda epic
Book was great UNTIL the author went and trashed everything he worked on for the first few hundred chapters. He literally destroys the whole planet they live on and tosses them onto another planet where humans are just slaves. All the characters, world building, etc. gone in one chapter. What gets me is after there planet with all their family was destroyed there is no grieving. They are just kind of like well that sucks now let's continue. That being said if you can get over that the book is good. The writing quality is good, the release rate is good, the grammar is good. I dropped it about 50 chapters after they blew up the original planet.
Bring it back please!!! This is a good story, it already has a manhua “All hail the sect leader” and it seens really good, so can you guys please translate the novel ?
I find the world to be great and many characters are great but i had to stop about chp 120. our MC is told how weak he is and almost dies multiple times before, yet he took the risk to fight knights he just saw fight very well. even after he thinks that old knight that trained his dad is a bad dude he walks right up to them and ask them , the dragon told him many times to not get in any dumb things until hes stronger.To me the MC is odd, we are told he likes to read and study at the start of the story, yet he seems dumb. after meeting granny he should had know he is not close to being that strong
to read this you have to have a slight degree of masochism or turn off the brainIf you try to take the story the least bit seriously, you will hate yourself.