Story is decent and it's a nice read if you're bored - However the translation is so fucking awfull, it's in badly need of an editor. On another note, more and more stories on Qidian is really lacking editors, many of the stories are pretty much so badly mawed by the translator that it's impossible to read - This one/others Qidian is dropped until and editor comes along.
The grammar is just... PERFECT. Plus there were no confusing moment as everything is paced really well. This could be a potential starlet you should add to your collection
I got to say that the translation is decent after being taken over by qidian but please for the love of novel dao. Please use the same names for characters and abilities and weapons and whatever else have names. Because coming to read this after I’ve read it before on WW, its irritating and kills the joy of reading this novel for me. At least when u take over a translation do it correctly not like this half assed crap. The novel itself is amazing as always.
Realy good novel, mc's personality is real, the plot is good but need to up the chapter release..............................................
I'm on the Empress's side. It's too bad. There are lots of characters who would question why the Empress had to kill him or who would accept it as their sacrifice meant something. This guy is ignorant to the core. There isn't even much to avenge. If that's the case, after reincarnating he'll want to get revenge on everyone who caused his death in every life? I've seen characters who had it thousands times worse than him but never had pitted out [justice]. (In this case it doesn't sound like you could ever use that word. The background and reasoning for his actions lacks depth and logic). Guess I won't be giving this a try, seeing as his not only did it not reel me in, but turned me away
A colossal waste of time. It started out good but at around Ch. 300+ it becomes unoriginal. It's basically a copy of another disciple cashback system I've read before at that point.
Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic. Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic.
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utter waste...no story..no commonsense...one of the worst story I read....,...,,........................mm...................................
Can anyone help me find a story where the protagonist finds a hidden room full of potions or essence that he uses to mind control his mother sister and aunt
@fallenblue, I would like to say that I really enjoy reading your story. So far it is going great and have high hopes for it.I like it how Gio is the only ML . And sofony and gio are perfect for each other. I like their increasing feelings for each other ....and it would be great if their will be romance between them. Gio is a bad ass guy and I would also like for sofony to do immoral stuff like crime , murder , and other immoral stuff except *** with other than gio. I liked it how she found a loophole in her first mission ....it would be good if she does bad stuff to only other bad people...and a showdown between immoral system users would be great. And I also like liked the sexual content of sofony with gio.....and felicity and that female gangster is good...but I would love it if sexual content is more descriptive.Overall the novel is great ....most people would love reading it...
A good novel, quite enjoyable. Though I gotta say, the novels I like rarely get picked up..A good novel, quite enjoyable. Though I gotta say, the novels I like rarely get picked up..A good novel, quite enjoyable. Though I gotta say, the novels I like rarely get picked up..A good novel, quite enjoyable. Though I gotta say, the novels I like rarely get picked up..