This is awesome...great storyline, great character development, great plot development. Everything is just awesome except for me thing... There are many spelling errors. Nothing big. Keep up the good work
Please continue writing. Please. I love your novel. I wanna read your novel. I wanna see you till the end of the novel. Please continue writing, please
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The story is good but the author writes very slowly. It should not be that difficult to write the events that will happen.At least the connected chapter should release together.
This story is an surprisingly in-depth biography of Samuel W. Francis, exploring his invention of the spork, his life, and his other creations (such as spiked shields and lawn darts). His philosophy behind inventing? "I'll add points to all things!"
its a really good book so far i like the story line and i could go hours reading this! keep making chapters!! even another book if you have to! i wanna see what happens next!
This is a good series, But the overall story is kind of bland and the progression in this series is kind of slow.
The story is interesting and promising. The concept of the story is very detailed. Even the world that the author created is perfectly depicted. Easy to understand, but rich with flavour.All I can say is that it would be better, I think, if you can use less "he" and change it into something less redundant like "The naked boy," or "the Bloke" or something else. Aside from that, I find it very amazing to see this concept inside a doomsday world.
After reading until chapter 150, I can safely say that this story is one of those glorious hidden gems that truly get way too little attention to how good they truly are. So, first of all, is the writing quality. The writing is decent, it is not the greatest of grammar, but it makes you emersed, invested, and truly is comfortable on the eye. The world background slowly improves, although, I have to warn you xianxia fansand the like, this story doesn't have the world-building you see in the 10,000+ chapters novels, but it does a pretty good job at it as the story progresses. The characters are oh so amazing. Seriously, you'll come to love them a lot (even the villains) and you truly despise the author when you see bad things happening to them, which only shows how amazingly written the characters are. The story development and plot are truly unpredictable. It's not generic in the slightest and has some plot twist, cliffhangers, and moments that truly leave you speechless. It is beautifully crafted and executed well to the point where you can binge read 60 chapters per day yet feel as if you've only been reading for 2 minutes. Pssst, do you want to know something even more interesting? All those praises that I gave this story....are all for 1 volume out of 20 glorious volumes that each far surpass the other.Go on and read this marvelous novel right now!
The story itself is good but there's a few issues with spacing. A tad bit of story gaps but it's still understandable, not too many issues with grammar and all that jazz so we good there. Other than that it's a good story
A great start of a novel with a familiar topic VRMMORPG hope to read more of it soon. Read the 17 chapters available so far and they were enjoyable despite some cringy dialogues which were still believable. Anyways, I hope the author continues this work and reveives the support he deserves. Gave him all 5 stars since I have seen people give 5 stars for a lot less. So whoever does not agree ... bite me.
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