The story starts as a high martial arts story but takes an about turn into low xianxia fantasy with no rhyme or reason. The plot is pretty much non existent and the cultivation levels of the characters are all over the place. It is shown that the MC is pretty much a never before seen genius by becoming a half step grandmaster at his age but in just 5-10 chapters every one of his generation he meets are grandmasters. Pretty nonsensical. Changing the MC name to Victor is also a stupid decision. It sounds awkward when everyone has Chinese names and only he has a western name. Overall skip this trash and save yourself some time.
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Really had fun reading it. Can't say i am not impressed love the Mc's style of talking. And he is really the guy who will crack you up at least once per chapter it seems
quite a good story. it is not easy when you pitch the ordinary with the exceptional. that sounds like a boring one sided match but it actually is not. i was reminded of the movie small soldiers where the gorgons who have been programmed to hide finally decide to fight. maybe i will see that in this story. good job by the author.
Well first of all, I myself is not used with this writing style but I can see that its well written. Though the beginnig has a lot going on in just a few sentences that I was confused at first. I can't give any advice because I already forgot most of what a book needs to have but just a quick word, hope that the author improve (There's always room for imrpovement) and I hope this books gets a lot of reader and supporter
The way this novel is going , has developed a sense of interest in me . I certainly see scope for development but im quite taken aback by the meticulous approach of the author . You should check out this novel , no joke ! Im sure you'll fall in love with it . Im really impressed by the constant updates in the story . Its really not easy to be putting out 1-2 chapters a day . Check out this story or you'll miss out!! My favourite VRMMORPG Lightnovel EVER!
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Does he get his sister back I need to know.
I love OP characters and Anastasia and Herman give me just that. Sometimes, the story becomes a little face paced, making it difficult for me to catch up, but otherwise, the rest of it is very well explained. I could clearly imagine the world because of the clarity of the world building. Definitely need more!!
I didn't read the story yet . I'm wondering what +18 mean!! Like describing a s*x scene or is for gore?? Because if it is gore i will be interested in reading it otherwise not my type
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