My Gym Turned Into A Reality Show After I Caught My Trainer

A perfect novel for me. Those who want plot armor and those typical xiamxia cliche....Shooo shooo you don't belong here.I wish they released more chap per day.

This is a typical cliche, why does MС think the same way and act the same way as a woman, is the author a woman? Any man in MC place would just break off the engagement and start developing his business skills, what's the problem?

Well first of all, I myself is not used with this writing style but I can see that its well written. Though the beginnig has a lot going on in just a few sentences that I was confused at first. I can't give any advice because I already forgot most of what a book needs to have but just a quick word, hope that the author improve (There's always room for imrpovement) and I hope this books gets a lot of reader and supporter

A novel with more than 200 chaps for free is being sold for money? ebfinpiwefpewifweihowiehfowiehfowhifowfhowehfoihfoiwhfoihwoifhoihoiefefnkefn

The author writes much of the story in passive voice. It makes it feel like you're not present for anything. We don't experience the story though the narrative POV, but we're told it in the most boring way.There are inconsistencies with the narrative distance and focus. For instance, sometimes you get told how someone else thinks, despite it not being established its omniscient POV.One thing that bothers the most is: What is his motivation?If the goal is to do a vlog, why does he do it? Money? Its clear vlogging becomes pointless after the first 20 chapters. So at the end of the day, the idea behind this story is a cheap hook to get you reading. Then it turns into the typical wish fulfilment trash.

Myriad of info dumps, literally the few early chapters are all info dumps for no reason nor logical flow to it.There are a lot of incosistency in term of the story flow or the lack there of, overall below average read.