looney287
Ch60 - It's about basketball - it's simple - Light binge - MC - He's decent and acts his 40yr old age, hasn't used his modern knowledge yet but is aware of it, lacking a few grains in the personality departmentPlot - Simple, become a NBA player and get a fair-skinned rich and pretty wife - This is repeated a few timesAuthor - Okay but does do a narrator ramble from time to time but has done his history System - It's upgrades, which is nice but Doesn't make sense to me, feels over complicated for some reason. However the MC feels the same Side-Characters - Like a Lettuce only salad - could use more stuff on the plate Romance - None - Author does describe a 16 year as having 'sexy legs' ..... yeh
It started good, but as it goes on the story just plainly went downhill after him having money with his cheat the inconsistency of the mc and also his sister's character is very noticeable. It was introduced that the MC has strong will and drive due to him and her sister growing up as orphans as well as her sister being a considerate person. It just went downhill that after the MC got ample money he just became a beta MC being subjected to the whims of her sister which also became spoiled. Nevertheless it was such a good story but the character development is just.... well whatever good luck
Its a great novel with a great character development slow and steady. No rush or something with a detailed plot , in the end its a novel worth reading....
Hey Author, akar tum Indian ho toh jalti se chapters update karo.... I'm eagerly waiting for the update ... I wanna read more about this novel... Thank you will be waiting for the updates ..
I love the story so far I wonder if in the future his crimson eyes will always be red or it's like he has to be in an enlightened state of mind.
It was great, though not enough chapters yet to thoroughly tell if it would be even better in the future. So yah~ Keep up it up!Don't mind this ---v(Anyway....seriously can't even post or write a review without enough Letters/Words...) <---don't mind this.
It's an awesom Virtual Reality novel. Most of the times I don't like VR novels but this one is an exception. Can't wait for new chapters. Keep up the good work author.
I should first say that every 5 star review was either somebody saying dont read, something not related to the novel. And finally somebody who just read the title. This is not only a waste of time but degrades the value of time spent on it.Hasty with the rewards, uninteresting MC, and finally pathetic plot development and character introduction. Some how by walking down the street he looks like a nice vampire. Screw Off ! And while he is a vampire even before he sees any bad states of humans the narration praises humans with great Wisdom.This is a childish book.
