This is an updated review after reading 60 chapters,Previously i felt the MC stupid for focusing on subclass as i believed it was a bad investment,But thankfully the mc did change and has now focused more on becoming stronger(not as much as i want but good enough for now),Considering the mc situation ill say his choices weren’t too bad(can’t expect him to be smart from the get go i suppose),Although i still don’t like trickster/disguiser path as i dont like cheap tricks and prefer frontal battle where you simply crush and dominate your enemies,But thats just an opinion and i like that the mc started to slowly focus on his main occupation (although ill still say he could be much stronger if he learns how to grind exp)anyway the story is going in a good direction at the moment, hopefully the mc keeps on his path and doesn’t become a goody two shoes self sacrificing selfless hero as i already have a phobia from these types of dense stupid MC’s( so far the NC has shown no signs whatsover that he will follow that crazy path thankfully)Anyway good luck author I’ll Follow this story(occasionally ill give comments, i only give comments when im annoyed by the mc or a lead character, i cant help myself sometimes to rant whenever the mc makes a choice contrary to what i believe is a better choice and so it’s probably often,,,)Anyway thanks for reading my lenthy unobstructive review.Sorry for writing a review that is more of an opinion than a proper review.
just a reminder. people who make undertale fanfics often drop because they feel "trapped" in the undertale universe, just remember there nothing preventing you from having a side chapter where the mc goes to a different multiverse. this way you can have an easyer time trying to find ideas and getting unmotivated due to lack of uploads. have a fine day bro.
. .Perfect... but almost abandoned... I do not know if something happened, but there is almost no release.
I really like the novel and I hope you will not drop it like your other novel There is so much nonsense on Webnovel these days so please don't drop your book and go on
Out of all of this authors works this is definitely the best and my favorite in my opinion. I don't really like the other works of this author. In the godless one i didn't feel like the MC personality reflected his own life experiences well, so i only read first few chapters. Against the heavens i just don't really like that MC either. I would also rather read about someone trying to gain power for revenge instead of love like this novel.
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I already love the plot, I hope it gets picked and or voted for. ................................ ......
Read up to chapter 15. Couldn't read anymore. Chapter 13 was especially annoying but I pushed past that.
I really like that there's a logical reason that there's a system in this. It's pleasant to read despite the few small errors and occasional things that make me go hmm. ;)I like the characters so far. There are dozens of reviews here that say things more eloquently, but, it's fun and deserves the little stars.
Hello guys! Author here. I just want to tell you something before you click that read button. You won't regret reading this book! Because it's something you've never seen or read before. This book unravels the mysteries of one of the most important things of all—the heart. And it shows how important this heart is as regards our eternity. Your face may lie, your tongue may do the same but what is that thing that can never lie? It is your heart, and that is what determines where we all end up. Up or down, heaven or hell?
Para que vean lo lento que va esto, en el capítulo 56 solo paso un dia y de ahí al 64 solo va por las 2 de la tarde, osea está tardando mucho para hacer una mierda, encima el MC es un cachondo de mierda. Ve a una mujer y ya está saltando a ella. Se dejó manipular para casarse con una mujer y ella le dice que hacer y el sigue lo que le dicen
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