It was a story I fell in love . But the familiar relationship was too week in this story . The MC kept forgetting that his mom and aunt are also his family not only lovers ..... After the harem messed up chapter the story felt forced . As if the MC is taking wrong decisions but the plot is helping to smooth things out . I had to drop by chapter 429 Sadly . Bcz it just ruind the mood of the story by then . Could’ve gone in so many different directions . But thank for the good story nevertheless .
Good premise but bad execution.... Racism shtz starts after trial read and so I already invested myself into it before the novel shows it's real colors... Also the story got is fast but the mc is slow as snail...
I have never done a review before but holy does this book deserve it.(If I did not need to make sure that it had 140 words spaces and letters this review would have been 69 letters and spaces long)
I like this novel but it seems to be a Faloo novel and there are Repeats of the same Chapters (and no i don't have the raw) Faloo = Bad most of the time Because they like to western and butcher the story then translated
just a good book overall if you can get though the grammar and spelling that they have but other then that it's a well written book?????
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Hi, author here. I’m not shameless. This story is one of the best stories on this platform. Go read and see it for yourself.Though, don’t come ranting if it isn’t to your liking. Every person has his/her preferences. The thing you dislike can be the thing like by others.
havent read this yet but i have a question, since they are gonna get married and have a daughter in the future, whats the point in his daughter telling him to contact and date her if its gonna happen eventually? what if they come together at an earlier time than that future, then that daughter wouldn't exist because of the timing. ?
The author writing is superb overall. With the interchange of occasional humor combine with wordplay, it's a plesant read for me. World is full with potential of exploration and is contstantly inviting the reader to explore the interesting idea it had. A good read if you're looking for a ride humu.
I hate so much about it but i'll name two things: 1. Why does he want to be friends? he is a literal monster. 2. he needs to forget his mother.
If he doesn’t choose the third option, then I’m gonna be disappointed
Other 2 choices are useless in front of real hard cash