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We need more brother excellent novel
No mistakes so far the novel to my liking bro continue please do not fail us your fans ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
To everyone that reads this: I'm writing out of fun and im not from England, Amerika etc where you speak english so please forgive me if you see some grammar mistakes or something.
I would also be really grateful if you write some feedbacks so that i can see how i can improve myself. Thanks
I've read the first chapter, and though this is only the start, the writing has drawn me in. The characters are realistic and the dialogue flows nicely! The story starts with a common narrative but I'm excited for how the author will continue. There could be some work with editing the chapter, since I noticed some grammar and punctuation mistakes but it didn't affect my quality of reading. I hope the author will update soon! ??
Utterly horrible English. Characters change gender at a whim, story doesn't flow. random emojis are used. could be a great story. does not do world building well.
This novel is very addicting, every chapter makes you want to read more and the imagery of the story imprisons you in the story. I am looking forward to the next novel this author have made. ?
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This story is a rare one, unlike werewolves or vampires, this one has goblins.At first the story has made me confused but when i read more chapters, it just makes me want to know more about the first card mage, and what happened to him.A very rare fantasy story, should read more chapters very soon.
No romance no harem forever ♾️No romance , I hate it No harem , I hate it.Please No romance ever, Ever ever.and no harm ever ever ever
Me after spending 100 coins on the book and giving it a Golden ticket.My coins: 0Do I have to say more.It's a really nice book and was worthy of the stuff.
In my opinion, this novel isn’t #1 rank material, but the author is a genius for bribing ppl with extra chapters for power stones.
Writing quality is not the worse but still pretty bad, lots of misspelling and wrong words used. Once example, ‘integration’ is frequently used instead of ‘interrogation’. Although this happens quite a lot, the real problem is the way the story is written. The writing style is too shallow, it doesn’t give you the sense that you are immersed in the story world. There are not enough details to describe the character and environment. Up to now I still can’t picture what the characters and the school look like. One reviewer compared this with Lord of the Mysteries, which is just absurd. The writing style of LoM makes you feel like you are inside the MC’s head, immersed in his thoughts, emotions, and actions. This novel feels like you’re reading a summary of the MC’s daily activities, it is detached and doesn’t bring you up close and personal.
Story development is progressing nicely so far. Contains your typical tropes and plot armor, but it’s not as absurdly done as other webnovels. Not much else to say since the novel is just beginning.
Character design: It’s too early to tell but so far just 2 characters have hints of hidden depth, which could lead somewhere interesting. For now, the characters seem very shallow. The characters need to be fleshed out more, especially regarding their physical descriptions. Vague descriptions like ‘short brown hair and tall figure’ and ‘long blonde hair and perfect proportions’ doesn’t cut it.
World background has great potential. Not much is revealed yet, but there are portals to other worlds and different species and factions, which leaves much to be discovered.
Overall, I like the novel. There are only 108 chapters released so far, so there is room for improvement. I look forward to seeing how this novel progresses, it definitely has great potential.