The MC is authentic and feels like a real human. Others (reviewers/commenters) say that this story is one dimensional or the plot feels plain, but that's because it's "slice-of-life" when you aren't expecting it to be. I feel slightly refreshed with this story, many slice-of-life stories with system elements are over-powered JP Protagonists with lots of hype and naïve outlooks or edgy (trying to set trends). Also, I personally like the mild x-nature the author writes. It lets you know what happened without being so explicit to write lemon scenes you find in many fanfictions with unrealistic events.I also like that the female heroines feel like real heroines. The heroines all have actual stories, backgrounds, and design; there is actual character development; and the their reactions feel satisfying to read. I don't feel it's too much of a stretch or exaggeration, and there is no fake "true love" as the author skirts around with each womans own personal thoughts on what defines what "love" means. Like one woman believes love of a man is him taking responsibility and thinking for the woman while a woman's love is acceptance. And this definition of "love" changes from heroine to heroine.I also like the protagonist's spending habits. It's part of the "authentic" feeling. The story starts off poor-to-rich, the main character's attempt to spend his new found wealth, realizing that certain "high end" brands are actually just trash and searching for his own definition of quality and spending money with quantity. It's worth noting that it also feels realistic, because this is the same behavior real people have when they win the lottery. I've seen people "waste" inheritances and there are plenty of stories online about people who win the lottery and ends up in debt. The protagonist's spending habits specifically targets his desires and the character development of the protagonist, while some events could be argued to be plot devices, it still totally happens in real life. Even the first heroine's placement into the "harem" and her "obedience" feels normal. I don't even think t's even excessively exaggerated, as when lots of money is involved, people become willing to do things they might tell themselves they wouldn't do normally.It's too bad only 40 chapters were translated even after 1 year, but I liked this story so much that I went ahead and found it's 386 MTL chapters somewhere else. 我有种植空间Overall, I recommend checking out this novel. It's medium length story with an urban setting with a harem seeking protagonist with a cheat-like farming space. The story uses the tag KingdomBuilding, but it would be more appropriate to say "Business Management
First, this is an ongoing novel with more than 3700 chapters. Even if the TL translates 2 ch/day, it will still take more than 5 years. I would much rather read a novel which can be read till completion among those in trial read.Second, while I agree that this novel is better than most ceo wife/mercenary novels, the point stands that it does not differ much from them either. Take it as a whopper among franchise based hamburgers.
If it continues on the same path this book will become very good. I just hope he takes care of everything so his family is safe. Then just become an absolute demon.
Hey was wondering when u will release new chapters I love this story so far and seeing as you have replied to others in the last 2-3 weeks I would imagine that you would be releasing them soon
I’m not writing another review for this novel because I believe I already did.First of all... LonelyTree is the best translator. He(she?) reads and likes all the recent comments in the recent novels. He/she doesn’t just read the top 3, he/she read ALL. Such dedication. I hope LonelyTree gets more recognized for his/her translated works(because ALL of them are in my library) and his communication with the readers. I heart this novel.... around other people who don’t look dangerous and not late at night like now. I hate reading this novel on a cliffhanger because it haunts me.
Hello, author here.First, I want to thank all of you for the support and the good feedbacks that you are giving me.I plan to write a long story and to review it bit by bit to correct any grammatical mistakes that I find.For now, you have my gratitude for sticking to my novel and I hope to keep seeing you all in the future.Have a nice day.
I have to say, as someone who has read wu xia novels for a year or more now. I have never bothered to do reviews at all because it seemed pointless to me no matter how good the story was but after binge reading all the available chapters. This novel really left me wanting to find out more and is also very relatable in terms of real life and is very realistic. I recommend this to readers who like novels that make sense yet are fictional and have martial arts at the same time, this novel really makes me feel that I know the characters personally and there is a real world behind it. Strongly recommend to others!! Although besides that, I think that the traslation is not bad besides the occasional typos and wrong names. Thanks for the efforts!
This book was absolutely amazing Steamy sexy intense, a perfect read. Totally recommend
next update soon
Great series! Moonlight Muse is a excellent author!
Great book
good book